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October 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG this was soooooo good. u should really write a follow-up to this w/ blase. mmm......tasty...~__^ ja!
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October 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like that story I thought it was hilarious at the end when Blaise popped out
ENJOYED THE STORY VERY MUCH
ENJOYED THE STORY VERY MUCH
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October 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great job with these two! I really loved the twist ending...
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October 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oy I love your writing, the twist ending is what set it all together. You have an amazing way with words and I cannot wait to read more or your storys.
~Amber
~Amber
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October 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
MY MUMMYS ALL GROWEDED UP!!!!
*Sniffles*
Anyways good story... For your first bit of smut, you wanted feedback that didn't confuse you so here i go.
'Once he reached the bottom of the shirt he tugged until it was released from wai waistband of the fitted trousers Dragon had to strut about in'- That sentance is worded funny either that or change the name to draco and he didnt have to wear the pants he chose to.
'Grinding his hips into Harry
*Sniffles*
Anyways good story... For your first bit of smut, you wanted feedback that didn't confuse you so here i go.
'Once he reached the bottom of the shirt he tugged until it was released from wai waistband of the fitted trousers Dragon had to strut about in'- That sentance is worded funny either that or change the name to draco and he didnt have to wear the pants he chose to.
'Grinding his hips into Harry
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October 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
gah!! *dies* i saw it coming, and when i happened, i loved it. *huggle* *glomp*
::does Veruca Salt impersonation:: I WANT MORE!!
::does Veruca Salt impersonation:: I WANT MORE!!
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October 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
welll ! one would think that blaise set this up. maybe a threesome will come out of this.draco and harry * sticking * it to blaise.
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October 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
interesting story. the part about Blaise spying was weird.