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by Addy

person Fefs
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No Draco no!!!! You have to fight!!! *fefs jumps near Draco and bind his arms to the desk* *fefs binds snape to the wall*
*Draco tries to get out to hurt harry*
Harry, quick!! Take your cloths and lets get the hell out of here!!
But what about Draco?? *harry asks crying*
We\'ll come and get him when we find the cure!
*snape glare at fefs* I\'m noT afraid of you, you sick bastard!! *fefs point her wand at severus* die snape, die!!! Avada..
Paff!! (door being openned) *Dumbledore enters and points his wand at fefs*(for the love of god, no pun intended!!!) SPELLIARMUS!!
*fefs glares at dumbledore* What the fuck??? are you on his side??
He is submited to the imperius curse.. FINITE INCANTEM
Oh.. lucky i didn\'t kill him then, right? *fefs blushes*
*snape looks kind of lost then he looks at Harry* Oh my God!! What have i done?? I\'m so kind and sexy and generous all the time since i became Harry\'s friend and discovered my Griffindore side and that i always loved Lupin!!
It\'s ok professor *harry said* just as long you give me the cure now...
Oh.. he just have to be kissed by the other person he loves *snape looks at fefs*
Oh... ok then.. *fefs\'s red cheeks gets redder* I love you too, you know, harry?
I know... i love you two...
*fefs kisses Draco* and i love you
Then the three of them were happily ever after.. loving each other and shagging eachother for the whole etternity.
The end
Tchan
person Danyel
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are wretched...why did you stop there? Oh why? WHY?!?!? Awesome story, keep it up!!
person thrnbrooke
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh someone has to stop this! I can\'t look away! Need chapter 6!
person Fuyu
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor harry, and please give me some recommendations. i ACTUALLY have an account in this site, though i\'m too lazy to log in (and my mind is too blank to actually think up a story *sob*). Please update, i really want to know what happens next
person Kai
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmmmm......since I had such an effect on you yesterday.....
UPDATE!!!!!! NOW!!!!!!!!!!! *puppy-dog eyes and pout*
Please?
LOVE YA!!!
Kai
person Kai
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oops, almost forgot to ask, in the beginning of
the first chapter, what is the title of that Marilyn Manson song?
LOVE YA!!!
Kai
person Fuyu
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
evil snape....i honestly think this is the first fic i\'ve read with snape as an evil character. please continue....i really want to know what happened
person myniephoenix
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
all i can say is... OH MY.... thats my review... update soon...

OH MY
person Anon
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
eek.
finish this pleaseee.
<3
person Anon
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Noo, the chapters are too short!!! Must. Write. More. Soon!!!!!