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for Harry and Dora: Beginnings

by oldwolf

schedule May 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I liked this very much & would diffently like ,ore of it. I like the idea of Harry not knowing anything, & being given step by step instructions.
schedule June 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! You have brought out a depth in the characters that usually gets glossed over and forgotten while advancing your story. While I'm a fan of a lot of your work, I think that this one is my favorite, as you seem to have focused more on the feelings and the budding relationship between our two friends rather than any really kinks until near the end. DO you plan on continuing this story? If your waiting for encouragement before doing so, one reader may not be much but I would really appreciate it if you did.

Thanks for your time.
person The_Resident
schedule July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This may be a one-shot reply to a challenge, but you handled it so well, it really deserves more chapters. You're a damn fine writer and I really like your stories. Keep up the great work.
person Puck
schedule July 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You got to continue this. Its a nice twist even if there isn't any D/s in it. I would love to see more chapters as Harry gets more comfortable with Dora and her kink. Just don't make him insane or evil.
Can't wait for more
person Drkman
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
damn you have got to continue this story
person Nicholas
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
its really good and you should definately continue. I know this review is short, but there's not much elso that needs to be said,. except, that I hope you continue this story.
person jw
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
interesting sorty id like to see where it goes
person John18111
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not bad story, I enjoyed the ending. Spanking can be so soothing to the soul :).
person cj_cold
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved this story.

when I saw it appear in the update lists I thought I would reread it. imagine my surprise when I saw new material had been added since the last reading.

Love the exploration of Tonks kink and the building of a relationship. If Harry is going to be an auror he is going to have to have a kink too. I think his should probably be control(dominate).

Sincerely hope that you decide to continue with this, I know you are currently working on other projects but this is really too good of a story to leave abandoned.

Update soon.
person wes
schedule September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok its a lot better now its finished makes sense