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for Can\'t Live With Remembering

by slberry75

person Narcissa Black
schedule April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. Dialogue, plot, sex. Thanks.
person LosaLou
schedule February 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
God, I just had to read that again! It was so amazing, keep writing dear God, keep writing!
person gryfforin
schedule December 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow,

Thank you everyone for the wonderful reviews. It means so much to get positive response from a fic that could for obvious reasons be taken any number of ways. For those that have asked about other D/Hr stories that I\'ve written, there is one here on AFF called Sins of the Father. It\'s a multi chapter fic and was the first multi chapter fic I managed to complete. I do have a few others that I will try to put up after I go over them some.

But, I don\'t recall too many questions regarding the fic itself. Believe it or not, I do have a bnney in the back of my mind that would be for obvious reasons, not Draco/Hermione but most definately continue the story in kind of the same eerie erotic atmosphere. I\'ve held off on writing it for a couple of reasons. One of which, the poetic way that Can\'t Live With Remembering was not intentional, but I love it. I\'m not sure that I can mimic it at this point in time. So, we\'ll see what comes about.

My current projects are a Severus/Hermione multi chapter fic and a Hermione/Remus one shot. So, thank you all for your reviews. If you haven\'t yet, please check out Sins of the Father. I\'d love to get your feedback on it . And since I am writing this on Christmas Eve 2004, I will say to all, Happy Holidays :D

<3 gryff
person LosaLou
schedule December 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I just had to drop another review, amazing story, I wish it had a second part, or that you would just write another Hermione/Draco fic, bye.
person LosaLou
schedule December 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AMAZING, FUCKING AMAZING! Beautifullly written, great sensory details, utterly perfect. I love the twist at the end, I couldn\'t have chosen that ending, I wouldn\'t have the guts for it, but you pulled it off. The signs of a good writer are if you can read it and understand what they\'re saying, contexual clues providing the hidden meanings for inuendeos, and almost anything else. Another, my favorite is if you can feel it happening, if you can close your eyes and see it. Last, but certainly not least, something that you would read again, and again, and again. Your story was amazing, pure, and ungodly Hermione and Draco. *Clap, Clap* I wish there was more to it, but I\'m not complaining.

LosaLou
person dragon34
schedule December 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was so cool. i wish i could ask for another chapter, but it would ruin the story. can\'t wait to see more from you.
person Relena
schedule December 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! I never review fanfics, but I had to leave my opinion for this one it\'s that good. Wonderful job.
person rosa
schedule November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was fricken awesome, usually such short stories are no good, but it was really wonderful, and surprising!
person JassyNite
schedule November 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story!!! The ending was perfect, really surpising. Luv how you jumped back and forth between characters to show both points of view.
person Pansy D.
schedule November 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Heyyyyyyyy!You're fantastic!It was soo good!I was so surprised!Well, all that I can say is that you are really talented. This was great!klap-klap