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October 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have got to be honest, there have been times when I read certain chapters that I was unsure of the way your
fanfic was going, however, the last chapter wss brilliant!! Loved the twins getting on the act, and Snape charging
in at the end like a Knight on his charger was great.
Got a feeling that when Hermione and Draco finallty get connected (if you know what I mean) fireworks would be
good enough for Buckingham Palace.
Four stars because without being judgmental you do tend to side track. efulefully you will stay on course now, love lots of the fanfic. best wishes, blessed be,
fanfic was going, however, the last chapter wss brilliant!! Loved the twins getting on the act, and Snape charging
in at the end like a Knight on his charger was great.
Got a feeling that when Hermione and Draco finallty get connected (if you know what I mean) fireworks would be
good enough for Buckingham Palace.
Four stars because without being judgmental you do tend to side track. efulefully you will stay on course now, love lots of the fanfic. best wishes, blessed be,
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October 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ch 6/5 - I still don't understand why he didn't tell Snape or Hermione/Ron/Harry that that was Rookwood. It's in ALL their best interests that Rookwood gets caught. Please update soon.
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October 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
it's not every day that i read a story that keeps me captivated, and not have sex in it. it's a very beautiful story, please continue it
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October 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Grrr... update soon! I like this story so far! it's great!!!
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October 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
very interesting story. I have enjoyed reading this and look forwar to more soon.