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for Sins of the Father

by slberry75

person LadyMalfoy730
schedule December 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow... this story was amazing! I love the wording of the chapter before last. When Draco said, \"The blood in my veins calls for a child.\" and the marriage vows are so great! Where ever did you learn how to write like this!? It\'s unbelievable!!! Thank you for writing this story!!! It\'s under my favorites!!!
person gemgems
schedule November 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
cool story its really interesting but when will it be finished
person Anon
schedule November 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
so many stars
person Hanna Delacour
schedule November 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please, please, please update soon! I love the story line, and the tension between Draco and Hermione! Absolutely Fabulous writing! Love it, love it, love it!
person Dreaming One
schedule November 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh! I can't get enough of this fic! It's so exciting, what with all the tension and the suspense, and the denial! lol. I can't wait for the next chapter. I must say, though, that Harry pisses me off. He's such a hypocrite! He's wiling to break rules when he feels coddled and 'out of the loop', but has no repect for Draco's out-of-the-loopness re: Rookwood. It's weird. With such a selective sense of morals, sometimes he does seem terribly Slytherin.
Anyway, enough of that. I am infatuated with your Draco, and can't wait to see what you write next. Molly's advice and perspective of Hermione's situation was much needed and very refreshing.
Update Soon!
~May
person fiesty30
schedule November 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
interesting turn of events..can't wait to see where this leads...especially considering that Hermione and Draco's relationship is bound to deepen even more...
person Draco_Luva
schedule November 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Hehehe... update soon!!!
person Dreaming One
schedule October 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is fantastic. I adore reading a D/Hr with actual plot. I thought I had read this story already, because I think I've seen a D/Hr with this title before...but I don't recognize the story-line. I really like your characterization of everybody in this fic. Draco is perfectly balanced between 'reformed' and 'same old git.' I also get a kick out of the completely undescribed connection between Draco and Hermione. It feels almost like you've dared yourself not to use any adjectives to describe it and not to name it, lol. I'm enjoying this.
Update Soon!
~May
person Christiana
schedule October 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey, i already read this on lj (this is anglicwitch from lj btw) and i just wanted to tell you that i LOVE this. you've got such a great style of writing!
person DirtyLiLHarryPotterFan
schedule October 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. You are really creative and a good writer. Can't wait for your next chapter.