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for Life Eternal

by AlectoPerdita

person cdkobasiuk
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww man I want more. This story has me going. I can\'t wait until Snape realizes it really is Potter. I can\'t wait for a lot of things. Great writing.

cdk
person Moi
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am tempted to order you to write faster, but I shall refrain for three reasons: A, you would probably just ignore the annoyance; B, how rude would that be? and C, I would not have you jeopardize the quality I have come to expect. So I shall wait. However, I shall not wait patiently. More, please!
person jademerald ((too lazy to log in))
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omg! Yay snape has figured it out .. I wonder what he\'ll do next?

Loved the update! - Jessica
person tsuki
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story of yours. The plot is very interesting and I like this idea of a cursed Harry. I\'ll be waiting to read the next chapter.
person Missi
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a good fic and I can\'t wait to see what happens next.
person Sparkleh
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I meant to say earlier... that it was apparent Abraham was a vampire from the first time you described him. XD At least for me! Evil Bram Stroker... writing that long book with all the boring in betweens. It all fits though:3

I\'d say the biggest clue was pale skin and overly red lips... that always irked me about Dracula. His lips. Apart from him what\'s happening to Shavonne was another flashing red light! Sudden sickness, steadily progressing... blah blah. Two \"insect bites\" on her neck.

But I <3 <3 <3 this ficcie... it\'s well written and intriguing... even if I can\'t spell...
person Moi
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I must confess, I usually dodge vampire fics. Just don\'t get into it. However, it\'s refreshing to have a vampire who is not Snape, and I confess I am hooked! I like the village setting, the Muggles nearby, the imperious aunt and her children! It\'s all good!
person SilverPhoenix
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i havent been in a reviewing mood for the last month so this is the second one ive done in July (yays lucky you!!!)...its 4am and i just wanted to say that i really love this fic so far...like theres only 8 chapters and its already one of my fav Snarry fics, and thats saying something as i read on avarge about 2-10 fics a day(depending on how many chapters) well i better get to bed, but i hope you update soon i cant wait :) *big hugs* (sorry its so short but im kinda depressed and not in the mood to do a long review tonight)
person BelledonnaSnape
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is emersed in a seductive darkness that wrappes around the reader and pulls them in. I love the dialogue and inter actions between your charecters you make this story very believable.It is a completely original story....PLEASE....PLEASE....PLEASE..update soo...
~BelledonnaSnape
person Missi
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I started reading this fic today, and I really like it. To be perfectly honest (because I always am) I didn\'t think that I would, but I was bored and decided to give it a try. I\'m glad I did, and can\'t wait to see how it ends. I\'m glad you didn\'t rip it apart and redo it after HBP came out-it couldn\'t possibly be as good then. Please update soon, and thank you for writing it in the first place.