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for Life Eternal

by AlectoPerdita

person kirjo
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just finished your story and it's a really good piece of work! The storyline is very interesting and it was fun to read!
But I hoped for a bit more action between Harry and Snape...
Nevertheless it was a really good story and I would like to read more storys from you, so please, keep going!
person shadow
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this story very much. To me it\'s well written. Each character have it\'s complexities. I can see the slow change between Snape and Harry. Just beneath hate there\'s love. It gives the reader a feeling that love or frienship could be bloomed in the most unforseen places. Good Job.
person Colene Creevey
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Me like! ^.^

You write well, and have an interesting plot. I would definitively read any followup should you decide to write one. *hint hint*

A Chocolate Covered Snape to you for your good work. ^.^
person Anon
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to thank you for writing this awesome story. Although this is my first review, I\'ve been faithfully following this story from the beginning, and really looked forward to each of your postings! I enjoyed your characterizations, particularly of Snape. Many post-Hogwarts, post-war fics make him a bit too fluffy, in my opinion, but I thought your portrayal was dead on-- I just don\'t see him changing his spots! I thought you wrote Harry very interestingly as well, a good combination of emotional vulnerability and magical strength. And I liked how you kept me guessing as to whether Voldemort was somehow going to reemerge during the story. My only criticism is that the ending seemed a bit too pat, perhaps you were rushed? That being said, however, great story. I can\'t wait to read what you write next!!
person Chys
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
VERY GOOD FIC.
person IaLE
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wAHEY! A great finale to a fantastic story. I\'ll tell you now that I think that this is one of the best stories in the Harry/Snape pairing. It\'s good in every way and you even had the characters right! Well done!
My Favourite Story.
person antipyro
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have read this magnificent story chapter to chapter every week after printing it off and squirrelling time here and there to do so. I looked forward to every word and waited with all of you with baited breath for a kiss, a feeling a something, to show the characters how they felt about each other.

WOW!

The thought and intellect put forth in this was truly amazing.

I could not have thought of a more appropriate ending, and YES! I WANT A SEQUEL!!!! DEFINATELY!!!!!!

This story had teased me to a new depth no other story has in it\'s clever simplicity. You make it sound so real.

Bravo!!!! and Thank you ever so much for this wonder fic.
person Lady Gray
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was awesome, one of the best harry potter fic\'s i have read, perhaps at least in part because of the distance from the current books. great job.
person Mel
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This fanfic is BRILLIANT!!!! i cant wait to rread what happens next. Youre a very talented writer well done. lookinf forward to the next part!!
person antipyro
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is the best fic! I love how you hold back sooo much, yet, tempt us with fantastic details. I\'m still guessing at the end. *sighs*

Love scene??? Can we get more???? I thought you were going to fall into that wonderful chasm of lust and passion before Harry sliced open Severus\' finger, but no, denied....again....*double sigh*

Only a short while to go, yet, it will seem forever. Best wishes to the laptop....

God speed the next installment.....