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for Her 16th Birthday

by jaber03

person luvhp
schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OOh, I loved it so much. The fact that she had a row with Ron while she was drunk was all the better for Draco. I love all things Draco/Hermione so I absolutely loved it!!! I especially like dthe fact that she actually stayed with him all day in bed. :)
person Megan Consoer
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
person Megan Consoer
schedule July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person ck
schedule February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
a few misspellings here and there, but pretty good.
person sestra
schedule April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omy
that was beyond wonderful
ii read your other stories and loved them too
write more, send me one if you are so daring
love your work
your choice of words paint lovely, vivid pictures in my virgin mind
keep writing!!!!
person Anon
schedule April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You\'re a natural. Good description of what rear entry sex is actually like. The only thing you left out were the tears immediately coming to your eyes at the most unbelievable pain you\'ve ever felt.
person Jorge
schedule January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this and hope that you update another chapter soon.
person G.A.G(Good As Gold)
schedule December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Got damn that was good
person shtoyshted
schedule December 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
man that was really good i hope u continue with it
person sheepy82
schedule November 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
excellent though more is required with more evil keep writing you have a nack