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for The Power of the Quill

by PinkCorsair

person mysticsong1978
schedule April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You rock!!

Hmm..... the potions classroom is probably too cliche . . . the Gryffindor common room? The Quidditch stands? She could watch from his lap .. see how quiet and experssionless she can keep her face?
person Lu Ling Qi
schedule April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Atrocious i hope, and by i hope i mean you must be kidding me, ginny and luciuos i hope to god you don;t do that. First sick ughhh and well that is really eveil. update soon i mean sooner any way good story i like the development
person anon no more
schedule April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A Potter portrait in Snapes quarters. Fantastic! A lude Hermione? Why not! Very funny and erotic.
person Ashley
schedule April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I had been following this story on FF.net and then suddenly you stopped posting new chapters. I had thought the story had died, but imagine my delight in finding it here! Update soon, alright? I love this story!
person Dark Schoolgirl Fantasies
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh...my...god... I love this story! This is just so great. I need you to update. Please before I lose my mind thinking about what might happen next. I love the fact that you had Hermoine trying to seduce Lupin. Sheer brilliance. I would have tried to ^_~ Keep writing. I\'m lovin\' it.
person 1296768304( tris)
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok i think that they will paint it gold and red. that would so piss him off!!! :D i LOVE the story so far. Snape and Herminione are perfect for each other i mena they are both stubborn right? love it

huggles~ Tris
person DarkangelXina
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well to answer your question....The houseelves could decorate the intire room in Gryffinfor colours and change the furniture. But what would realy make him mad...THE HOUSEELVES GETTING RIDE OF HIS OLD BLACK WARDROBE AND REPLACING IT WITH A COLOURFULL ONE!!!!!
person guestness
schedule March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oo! Omg, I love this chapter! A great follow up. ^^
>< Hee hee. How about the bright colors of Gryffindor, overly done and dramatic. >O Maybe have the place smell girly, lol
person catpower
schedule March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am so loving this story - Hermione\'s first time made perfect sense to me, given Snape\'s lack of experience.

I think Snape would specially hate a pink bedroom with furry cushions and cuddly toys - but maybe that\'s too obvious. How about a kinky black-tiled bathroom with some sort of bat motif going on? He would also hate the griffindor colours. I know - how about a large cuddly toy griffin, wearing griffindor quidditch robes and a small flying toy bat. There could also be a lot of non-wizard photos of Hermione\'s family everywhere - especially on what was his desk.

Snape would also loathe it if Hermione binned most of his clothes and filled his wardrobe with trendy muggle clothing and trainers. TeeHee.
person littleoldlady
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
excellent, I laughed all the way through! keep up the good work.