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This is brilliant. The plot is great. I really feel like I\'m reading a Harry Pottter fic, except for the sex scenes. But gotta love those too. I can\'t wait for the next update. I don\'t know where they should do it next... mmm, I\'ll go think about that. I wonder what the scars are. I\'ll never be able to read a Harry Potter book without thinking of Snape in a erotic way now.

That was hilarious!

This is a great story. I just found it a couple of days ago ad have stayed up most nightsreading it. Snape has always been one of my favorite characters. I think you have done a great job with him. Keep it up.

please update soon, oh yeah, for a place........ one of the tables in the dinning hall at night....

dude, you should them do it in the potions room. on one of the desks. and then at next potions someone like malfoy, harry, or ron should sit at it. another good place would be the transfiguration room. or, mwhahahahaha, dumbledore\'s office. though, I have no clue how you could manage the last one, it would still be entertaining (;.

I had no idea how you were going to make them into a believeable couple, but you did and you did it very well. I do still have a problem with Luna, but I am hoping she and Hermione can become friends. Now on to the place to have sex in the open where they are not suppose too. Since Snape is a teacher....I think the normal school children place have to be a big NO....but how about them having a fight and she levitating him out into the lake (payback) then she jumps in after him. They have sex in the lake....would be kind of funny and since you have had people thrown in the lake by Snape it would be fitting.

The idea of a 15 year old Ginny having to marry Lucius is sick....please reconsider. I have no problem with Lucius in stories with Hermione and Ginny, but they tend to be older. 15 is still a child and I can\'t think of a way for someone to marry Ginny to save her when she is only 15.

I just found your story, and I\'m glad I did! You\'ve captured JK\'s characters better than most other writers I\'ve read. I just wish Harry had a better deal. I can\'t wait for more!!!

All I can possably think after reading that length of written amazment is well HOLY-FREAKEN-SHIZNT! That had to be one of the more creative and non-PWP likke love seance I have ever read, it was tasteful and realistic yet also held a sence of humer. Do by ALL means continu with the story I would enjoy hearing further!

I am begging you please do go one more please? I am like totaly inthralled with this story staied up till midnight reading it thus far!

nice one...hermione n severus might fall for each other...but i feel sorry about pansy...she has suffered all of it becoz of her bloodline...hopefully ron will be gentle n kind with her...n hopefully ginny won\'t be married to lucius...that would b a death warrent for her and her family...all the best n keep up the good work...hope u\'ll update it soon coz this fic is quite interesting to read..