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first....YAY! I\'m sooo happy that you updated...and with a great chapter too! Keep up the good work. I\'m not sure asto what kind of punishement to suggest, but if someone I knew went through something like Pansy went through, I\'d want them to feel what it would be like othe recieving end. I\'d do the same thing to them that they did to the other person. Those acts were way too low to be retaliated with childish curses....but on a brighter note, I am wondering what does Narcissa want with my favorite pair of twins? By the way, I\'m loving the \'bad girl\' Narcissa!!!
Once again awesome installment!!!!
Keep up the good work

I guess the only thing I\'m worrying about is Harry\'s position in his new family. You\'ve given Narcissa so much strength that I can\'t help but wonder what you\'re leaving Harry with. The thing he\'s always wanted most is a family, and now he\'s going to be a father, yet we never see him say anything about it. Even if he\'s worried out of his mind about it, we don\'t get anything. Is he happy that he\'ll be a father, is he hoping it it\'s going to be a son despite what Narcissa says. We don\'t know about James, did he have any siblings? If not then odds are Harry will have a son just as James\' parents had a male child first, as did Lily and James. Narcissa is far from a Mary Sue but everything just seems to be going in her favor. I don\'t mean you have to have Lucius come out and kill her but a setback of some kind would be interesting.

I also can\'t help but wonder if she\'s falling into the same trap as those that have come before her. How many people have underestimated Harry, is Narcissa one of them? Does she really believe she\'s got him completely wrapped up? What happens when the time comes to change a diaper or some other task that Narcissa believes should be handled by a house elf? Is she going to sit back while Harry gets closer with their daughters, or will she get her hands dirty? Also, how does she feel about being married or being invovled with a guy who actually treats her properly for once in her life? Does she have soft side or is everything cool and calculating with her?

P.S. How does she plan on keeping him in check when her belly gets big and she\'s unable to keep him satisfied. I mean here she is giving him sex quite often, she\'s going to have to do something about it because lets face it....a sixteen/seventeen year old boy is going ot be hard pressed to give up sex once he\'s gotten some.

I look forward to more, please don\'t keep us waiting for too long.

You are excellent at writing humor. I actually peed my pants reading this chapter! Can\'t wait to read more! Exploding packages! I can imagine Snape holding Mr. Granger upside down ! and more ... LOLOLOLOLOL now to read the next chpt.

A great place for them to get together is in the potions classroom on his desk of course that is cliche. How about the Gryffindor Common room? In front of the fireplace? They had an argument in the middle of the night and she went there, he went there to make sure she was safe.....

I really like this story. You keep me in stitices.... you make everything sooo funny.

i think you should get every one to prank him and hold a copetition of who you could get to paank draco the most anyways back to your story i felt as if you didn\'t resolve the party situation which i thought you woul do in this chapter are well any ways other then that it was great

First YEAHH you updated! next i love the inter school police thing being formed and i want punishment yeah ok grreat stiry keep updating!

wow, loved that last line, and this chapter rocked. Update soon, please.

Minerva\'s office.

headmasters office

Good Gods!!! Finish the story. Please. It\'s bloody brilliant. If you don\'t mind may I make a suggestion. Try to make hermione yearn for snape. Do somthing to him like come back home in a broken state after seeing voldemort. Or a spasm when he\'s trying to fight the dark mark. Hope to see the updated story soon