rate_review Reviews

Your story is great I love it so much! You are a real writer!!
But I have some questions to you:
1.Why do you think that snape will marry Herm.? I think he\'ll rather die than marry anyone/ Snape is inaccessible man.
2And if

If you read H.B.P you should know that Snape is a half blood wizard.
But story is real great!

I have to admit that you are one of the greatest authors of fan fcition I read! I like your style and story plot , and the humour is just great! I couldn\'t stop laughing at 2 o\'clock in the night when I was reading the first chapter. In previous chapter you wondered in which Hogwarts location to pair up Snape and Hermione and I have a suggestion to put them into the Potions\' Lab and as a result students would accidently see them, its gotta be fun!! Just a suggestion.
Can\'t wait to read your next chapter! I seriously sometimes have to remind myself that I am not reading the original J.K Rowling but it would have been fun to see her use your ideas, especially the one between Snape and Hermione during sex...

That was the most brilliantly funny/accurate \"first time\" scene I\'ve ever read. Your characterizations are dead-on, too.

Hey! I\'m new to your story, but you got me as a faithfull reader from now on. The whole idea of the marriage law is so crazy, one has to call it inspired already ;) I love the way Hermione and Snape hate eachother\'s guts but \'become aquainted\' all the same - more of that please! A few chapters ago you asked for places H and S could have sex - I am all for the prefect\'s bathroom ;) For my part, I think it is your story and you should do as you like, so ditch as much as you want from the HBP. You should probably use the \'lessons\' though (like nonverbal spells and the like). Please update soon!

You have no idea how glad I am to see that you didn\'t abandon this story! Great chapter and I can\'t wait for more Severus and Hermione chapters. Keep up the good work!

Hugs and Kisses
Ashley

This is something we call a *addictive fanfiction*. Why? Because, you start reading, and can not stop! I began around 10, think I would stop in a hour to go to bed. Boy was i wrong! It is now 6 in the morning. I am tired, and I am in love, and I am going to DIE without the next chapter! I love this story, this plot, the pairings, the plot twisties, the charrie portayals, and everything else, especialy YOU! The one who put it all togethor! YOU ARE MY GOD! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

This is something we call a *addictive fanfiction*. Why? Because, you start reading, and can not stop! I began around 10, think I would stop in a hour to go to bed. Boy was i wrong! It is now 6 in the morning. I am tired, and I am in love, and I am going to DIE without the next chapter! I love this story, this plot, the pairings, the plot twisties, the charrie portayals, and everything else, especialy YOU! The one who put it all togethor! YOU ARE MY GOD! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

i absolutely love your story but i don\'t want you to make snape bad i want him to remain faithful to the order and i don\'t want dumbledore to die either so please don\'t kill him or make severus bad pleaseeeeeee other than that you can use any sory line from HPB

Great to see the return of this story, which I\'d given up as a lost cause. A Pansy/Molly storyline is an interesting and unusual thing - I\'m liking it a lot. I don\'t really care about the HBP thing, I\'d just like more smut (sorry).