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October 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! I am very impressed. You portrayed the agony of parkinson's situation perfectly, and, to be frank, I cannot find a flaw in your work.
I am looking very forward to your next chapter
I am looking very forward to your next chapter
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October 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i still like the story although that was a little harsh. but i want ron to get over it and help pansy and kick dracos butt. he deserves it.
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October 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am very impressed. It's like reading from the actual book! You have the character's personalities down to a.
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But, I do have some thoughts. Use that "Anti-clothes" curse again. That was genius.
Also, if the chance strikes you, try to get a lemon scene going between Cho and Harry. I've been anxiously awaiting the smut in this story, so, do add something of the like in soon.
I hope to see the next chapter soon.
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But, I do have some thoughts. Use that "Anti-clothes" curse again. That was genius.
Also, if the chance strikes you, try to get a lemon scene going between Cho and Harry. I've been anxiously awaiting the smut in this story, so, do add something of the like in soon.
I hope to see the next chapter soon.
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October 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
very entertaining!!! I started reading this thinking it was just going to be another snape/her smutlet and found a funny and interesting story about how the marriage law is effecting all of Hogwarts.... post more soon!!
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October 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Argh, this is GOOD! Wonderful characterisations, waysways knew Hermione had a temper!
More please!
More please!
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October 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I've read it, and I a I am reviewing it.
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October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great chapter you had me laughing 3 times. please continue. oh and give us some herm/snape action soon.
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October 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
eeeewwwwww exc excuse me while i go get a brain transplant....can't believe you made me read that *shudder*
hey, loving the story, feeling exteremly sorry for Hermie (hehe)
update asap please!!!!!!!!!!!
hey, loving the story, feeling exteremly sorry for Hermie (hehe)
update asap please!!!!!!!!!!!
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October 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this story is hilarious please continue i can not wait to read more. and i can not wait to see what happens next.