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November 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good chapter, especially liked the conversation between Remus and Severus.
Glad the DA is going to do something about Draco and his puppets, may I suggest Castration.
We seem to have waited a long time for this update, hopefully you'll make it to us readers by
updated sooner rather than later.
complex fanfic diserving 5 stars.
Glad the DA is going to do something about Draco and his puppets, may I suggest Castration.
We seem to have waited a long time for this update, hopefully you'll make it to us readers by
updated sooner rather than later.
complex fanfic diserving 5 stars.
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November 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Clever fic. I like the direction you're taking. Nice tension building between Snape and Hermione. Somehow, I almost feel that Ron and Pansy could merit their own story, but I like it this just as well.
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November 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE post chapter 13! I NEED to find out what happens next! I'm dying here! PLEASE!!!!!!
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November 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Man this story is so good I would rate it in the sleagleague as any of rowlings storys. I captured everything just perfectly. I cant wait til the next chapters.....
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November 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I just wanted to let you know that you are an amazing writer. This is absolutly FABULOUS. Wonderful idea, even if the basis was challenge, this is the only one I have been willing to read so far. You go! Ja ne!
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November 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow a wonderful story. Violent but damn good. Ron was the shit in the last chapter that is a ll I can say. Keep up with the excellent work and up date soon
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October 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Cool. Ron gets protective, Pansy gets somewhat sympathetic, and Crabbe takes out his friends. Awesome.
Of course the nasty little rat of a Malfoy should get what he deserves. Pansy's not a great person, but no one ever "deserves" a violent rape. Ever.
Thanks for writing. Please continue!
Of course the nasty little rat of a Malfoy should get what he deserves. Pansy's not a great person, but no one ever "deserves" a violent rape. Ever.
Thanks for writing. Please continue!
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October 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'd go with the ass-kicking. Cause if she dies, you the author become what you condemn. I want some revenge and some happy-endingness :-D
(sorry to be so heavy lol I get way to involved with these stories. it just means you are doing a kick-ass job already).
buona scrittura
(sorry to be so heavy lol I get way to involved with these stories. it just means you are doing a kick-ass job already).
buona scrittura
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October 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This story is great! Wonderful mix of humor and serious issues. I never thought someone could make me feel sorry for Pansy but you definitely managed it. Update very soon!
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October 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you go ron. kick that sexy but snotty butt . another good chapter but when will we see some snape /hermione moments??