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i have to agree with harry... WHAT?!
update soon.. i'm dying here!!!

o mi gd. pls update soon cos that is the coolest marriage law story I have ever read!!

I love this story. I started reading it last night and couldn't stop until I got all the way through, I can't wait until you get to the next part. I'm torn wether you should rescue Sirius or not........ please do as long and Hermione and SNape come first ;-) lol. I can't wait to see mroe of that. I absolutly loved the fight scene, it was hilarious. My favourite part was Hermione's mom being punched twice, on accident, then going mad woman and getting midevil on Snape's hieny. I can't wait for them, to meat up again, I'm assuming they will. That would be awesome. ANyway, I wanted to thank you for writing this story and I want to tell you once again, I will be checking back every wakeing hour to see when you update this story again.......

Suggestion, obviously Narcissa is likable enough to us readers, that praps after she's had two children, Harry feels reluctant to end the marriage and decides that he can love her and hence remain married to her. Maybe a bit predictable, but not really considering noone has really contemplated this matching before. Nice theory about Draco being like his father in that way, you've done your research. As my name suggests I love Draco, but unfortunately for him not in this story. The worst of it is is that it is quite possible that he will end up like how you suggest. But I don't want to think about that!

In terms of Severus, I never really pictured him being this aggressive or cruel. I dunno if he would quite react that way to how he did in the meeting with Hermione's parents, but that is only my opinion. Since this is your story, your interpretation is really all that matters.

You totally made me laugh and cry all in one chapter!!!!!!

This is one of the best stories that I have read in some time. With all of the fanfiction around, it is hard to find a really good story. There are so many things that I want to day about this story. First of all, I want to congragulate you on not only a great story idea, but also on your great writing, that goes to your BETA too. I love your characterization of the characters. It seems very true to nature. I especially loved Flint. He actually seemed cool! Glad he is not a DE, or at least from what he says! I do think that your characterization of Albus is a little off. I love Snape in this story. He is very true to his character. I loved that he was so protective of Pansy with his declaration to kill Draco. All I have to say is that it is about time! I loved that there was also a part about Andromeda. I have always wondered about her. I wonder if Narcissa is going to be good or evil? That will be interesting to read. I have also been a fan of "Lilerus" or the Lily/Severus ship. I loved that that could be an aspect of this story. My only question is if this is the answer to the WIKTT teacher challenge. I think that this is the best one that I have read so far.

Im loving it.

Please go on with the story soon. I want to know what' going on with hermine and severus and her parents
and ron and pansy....also harry (but not so much)

I look forward to the rest of your story. It is well written!

Thanks so much for working on this for us. I know how real life can get in the way of writing...I just now po an an update to a story I hadn't written on since May! Good luck with the computer problems as well. So you're going with the Snape/Lily thing, eh? Okay.