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lol miny malfoy

I like what that guy Jimmy, lol original name, said above, it would be neat to have Narcissa move to hogwarts, also let\'s see some smut!

Brilliant! I actually cried at one point, and laughed in many others. please post soon

I loved this newest addition to the story. the story is very good, and I look forwrd to the next chapter. Please udate soon.

That was most definitely the best end of any chapter I\'ve ever read. I\'m still giggling to myself and people around me are giving me strange looks...Awesome, kick-ass stuff. I\'m very much looking forward to your next chapter. Love it.

Loved the last chapter. can\'t wait for more.

Dude love the story, I think that Harry should find a way to get his $$ back, and kick some dursley ass. Also I think it would be cool if for some reason Narcissa has to move outta the Black estate and lives in HOgwarts in that new wing you talked about in an earlier chapter, cuz I think him going to the Black Manor every weekend isn\'t very feasable. Plus I wouldn\'t mind a little less story went towards the Snape/Hermoine couple and a little more story was written on the other couples like Ron\'s and Harry\'s.

Anyways I really like the story overall thought, keep on writing it!

oh yea and I love the new spell\'s you\'ve invented.

later,

Jimmy

That was truly magnificent! I haven

Ch 15 - rats! Hermione got caught!! I hope you have nice stuff ahead for Severus - you gave him an awful childhood. Can\'t believe Dumbledore would let poor Severus (first year) go on stage in a girl\'s nightshirt; Dumbledore is a wizard, could\'ve used his wand to transfiure it into boy\'s clothing. Re Narcissa and Harry - I think Narcissa should personally take out Lucius, FAST; hmm, maybe frame Draco for it. As for Harry and the Dursleys, I don\'t like the idea of folks getting away with stealing money that should\'ve been used to care for an orphan. Can\'t Harry and the Gringott\'s goblins figure out a way to reverse the transactions, restore the money from Muggle bank to his Gringott\'s account?

Leave him in the realm for now...I don\'t think that little expedition would fit well with this story, it would be a distraction. Also you need to update soon or we\'ll all be coming after you. We want that Hermione/Severus action soon dammit! Great story though. It\'s so clever and amusing, I\'m loving it. I can\'t wait to see what happens. ta