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Great chapter! I want more Hermione/Snape action! Just one question though: Will Severus and Hermione fall in love? *sniffs* it would be so... so... Beautiful!

good chappy dude, I say you have Malfoy go with Crabbe, Goyle and a couple other goons, i don\'t really care, and I say you show off how powerful Harry has become, have him and maybe Ron, or just Harry, kick there asses.

i think you should kill all three of those pricks off in one swoop by pansey kind of the eye for an eye deal

I have no idea how the hell you\'ve managed to pull this off, but I\'m impressed! Your themes range from extreme black humour to explicit violence, and yet, amazingly, it works. I like the idea of the totalitarian Ministry - it\'s a development of the control displayed in OotP. In some parts I found the pace a bit slow moving; ie, the conversation between Harry & Flint then Harry & Narcissa. I can\'t wait to read more. Could you email me when you next update? I\'d like to keep track of this.

thank you so much!i ca\'nt wait to see these 2 get married.and pansy. the conversation with ginny was perfect.keep it up, ok.

OMG!!! Pansy Parkinsons true heritage was absolutely BRILLIANT!!!! A true jaw dropper that made me litterally scream and then proceed to have a fit of hysterical laughter!!! I had the greatest mental image of her actually ending up face down in a bowl of oatmeal and that made me even more hysterical. I absolutely LOVED the whole food fight and the fact that the staff were letting it go on until they started throwing hexes. I could picture Draco Malfoy standing there wide eyed dripping in all kinds of gross food when Dumbledore finally put an end to it. The whole Narcissa Black thing really threw me for a loop!!! That came out of nowhere and was a FABULOUS twist. The Weasley twins experiencing that little psychic connection to the mayhem at the school was a very clever touch. *Kudos* This is a great fic so far!
Jaimie

ROFLMFAO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That is just too hilarious!! Hermione seeing Dumbledore from behind in his office I got the most amazing mental picture and It Damn near killed me I was laughing so hard. I loved the part about finding something to gouge her eyes out with. I am loving this fic. Jaimie

Ch 16 - Draco, Crabbe, and Goyle are ENOUGH for the Burrow - most of the time, it\'ll just be Pansy and Mrs Weasley there, with Mr Weasley there at night. (Bill is in Egypt, Charlie in Romania, Percy not talking to family, twins at their shop, Ron and Ginny in school.) I wish Hermione was at least a little bit more sympathetic to Severus - yes, he\'s always had to pay for sex, but why does she get angry at him for that? What does she want him to do - pay HER for sex too? It\'s not his fault that being a spy and Death Eater puts a cramp in his romantic life. BTW, very unique touch, to have Hagrid and McGonagall be Snape\'s godparents. I\'m still waiting for the Dursleys to get payback for taking Harry\'s money! Thanks for the chapter.

dude when the nex chappy comin?

I have to say i have read HP fan fiction for at least four years now and the cannon of course and i just have to tell you i love your combination of humor seriousness and plot line, ive read other marrage law stories and they sucked, also any non pwp hermione/snape stroies were very unrealistic yours is more like how they both would react to the situation, you are up with the good authors like cassandra clarie\'s draco domandies serise. awsome fanfic