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for The Power of the Quill

by PinkCorsair

person Reggiz99
schedule January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good shit dude, keep it up. I hope the next chappy has Malfoy and 3 or 4 goons try to take on the Burrow, and Harry n Ronny kick there asses!!
person vblum12
schedule January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my.... well its interesting enough
person June
schedule January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 18 part 2 - ooh, that stupid Hermione! SLAP, SLAP, SLAP, SLAP, SLAP! Here\'s Snapey, helping her to escape Lucius Malfoy, and all she can think about is hurting him by having sex before the wedding! Idiot girl.... should chop her into basilisk food...
person The Great Anon
schedule January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting view on such a pairing. I just noticed one thing. You mentioned the \"tearing of the maidenhood\" inside the vagina. I am guessing by \"maidenhood\" you mean the hymen. In reality did you know the hymen is not inside the vagine, but is a flap of skin over the outside of the opening of the vagina? Now if you ment \"maidenhood\" as something else I am greatly interested to know what it is.
Great story, keep up the good work!
person Fire_Haired_Lovely
schedule January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think the story is coming along swimmingly. And by the way Trevor is supposed to Regulas Black Sirius\' younger bro.

Interesting move on trying to get Hermione to lose her virginity.

Keep it coming!

Plot Bunnies Rule!
person eve
schedule January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it\'s \"regulus\".

i wish you\'d load the next chapter today. ::emo!sigh::
person thelorelei
schedule January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, that was hilarious... that was fabulous... that made me throw up in my mouth a little... please hurry with the next chapter!
person Anne
schedule January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so trevor is Regulus Black...nice...good job on everything. Especially Trevor!
person pinkyheather
schedule January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol, i\'ve not laughed so hard throughout a part of a fic for a while. First it was the feet, then it was his room, which okay grossed me out as more than it made me laugh, then it was when she wanted to see it, then after she got him hard and called it a mule dick, then when she shoved him off the bed. LOL So great. I can\'t wait to read more of this!!
person anon no more
schedule January 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How funny. He actually passed out? Ron said NO and Lupin I can understand. After everything else Snape could just poison him quitely one month.

Great Story.