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February 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! You have so much talent. Update soon, though.
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January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, this is hilarious! I love it.
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January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve been enjoying this fanfic very much, but I am sorry to say that this chapter does not gel for me.
I can not see Dumbledore allowing Severus to have his rooms in such a state (even though I thought the Cloak part
was funny) knowing Hermione was going to live there from now on.
Hermione is a very knowledgable young lady, I think she would have had a complete library of sexual facts stored in
her brain.
I will still keep reading because up till now I\'ve thought it a very clever MLC. and hopefully will go back to enjoying
reading the next chapter.
I can not see Dumbledore allowing Severus to have his rooms in such a state (even though I thought the Cloak part
was funny) knowing Hermione was going to live there from now on.
Hermione is a very knowledgable young lady, I think she would have had a complete library of sexual facts stored in
her brain.
I will still keep reading because up till now I\'ve thought it a very clever MLC. and hopefully will go back to enjoying
reading the next chapter.
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January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy Shit! I made the mistake of reading this while I was eating dinner, needles to say the foot/canoe bit had it decorating my screan and the ahm, consumation had me doing it all over again. this is a wonderful story and a wonderful chapter, I enjoyed it to no end. Looking forward to that speady up-datee
Maggie
Maggie
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January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i have laughed so hard through this story..I can picture this, and im still laughing...now all you have to do is make them actually fall for each other....but keep it funny still..i love to laugh when i read a story...
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January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love your description of Snape\'s rooms. First time I\'ve read a fic where he is a slob :-). Laughed my head off.
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January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was the funniest sex chapter I\'ve ever read. I really hope it gets better for them.
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January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
severus\' stick and fang\'s trots! hahahaha!
er, black opals aren\'t black. parts of them can be, but there are lots of speckles that are truly breathtaking. i doubt a band of black opal could be anything to turn your nose at. herm shold know better. (black opals are my favourite stone, partially because of the \"bad luck\", which is stupid, but cool.)
i think meant \"maiden-head\", btw.
can\'t wait for more!
er, black opals aren\'t black. parts of them can be, but there are lots of speckles that are truly breathtaking. i doubt a band of black opal could be anything to turn your nose at. herm shold know better. (black opals are my favourite stone, partially because of the \"bad luck\", which is stupid, but cool.)
i think meant \"maiden-head\", btw.
can\'t wait for more!
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January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great.just when you think it can\'t get any better,it does.that reminded me of my first time.you are a genius.
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January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am here to review again to really answer your question. It is of course Regulus Black, my favorite character. I also like how the story is progressing and hope that you update more frequently. I would also like to hear more from Regulus. Why is he a toad? Will he ever become human again? Does he have any children? You are a great writer and hope that you never stop writing!