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for The Power of the Quill

by PinkCorsair

person wyvern
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmm... the one thing that would drive Snape wild.... Well, maybe they could reupholster his favorite chair in a lovely daisy print... Pink bed hangings... oooo they could make all the furniture that tiny French provinicial style that drives my own hubby nuts (he says it looks like it would fall to pieces if you actually parked your bum on it)...
person jenny
schedule February 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This the frist time I have reveiwed your story! And let me tell you I really like it I usully don\'t read hermoine/snape but my mother is in love with the paring. (which is quite disderbing that my mother reads this stuff, but it is my falt I really should learn to exit out of stuff) any way something in this chapter cought my attion, and I have a question. The fact that Severus only had sex with muggle prostitutes, makes me wounder if he could have, maybe been with Mary Kathleen Taylor, and possibly be pansy\'s father?
schedule February 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! I\'m really enjoying this amazing display of *true* Hermione & Snape character. I have to admit this is probably the first HG/SS story that holds true to the entire series. I absolutely adore the comedy in this as well. Dumbledore\'s \'deflated butt\' was absolutely hysterical. I look forward to their upcoming sexual exploits, and I\'m extremely interested in seeing how Ron & Pansy\'s upcoming nuptials and consummation play out. Fantastic job!
person nicole
schedule February 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, that is a change i mean i never thought that they woiuld ever be an \'item\' but i think that in ff it is possilbe. i love your sroty.
person Nymphe
schedule February 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank goodness you have the story at this location since I know it will get deleted at a certain site.
person metoo2
schedule February 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i\'M sorry but i can\'t read a story wear snapes bad in bed its just so wrong, i loved your story but if some improvement in his performance doest show up i dont think i could stonmach much more of that, othere than that though your story is really good.
person yri
schedule February 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was the funniest wedding nite scene I have read...:) thanks
person guest
schedule February 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woh ho woh ho! Oo; What a chappie. I really enjoyed this. I did feel you rushed a bit after her maidenhead broke- like there should\'ve been a bit more complication.
^^ Tee hee. Can\'t wait for the next chapters.
person guest
schedule February 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m rather impressed with your writing style so far. Very much like the books(but with your style of humor- and some R and NC-17 qualities of course).
I know I\'m going to read more! Xp
person guest
schedule February 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I skipped the gruesome part of the chapter, because I have a hard time handling that kind of stuff. The second half was very emotional, and I enjoyed the points made.