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by babygrrl

person Anon
schedule June 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow. :) I read this story yesterday before going to sleep. Guess what I was dreaming about this night. That\'s right, I was dreaming about my little sister (yes, I have a little sister too) and making love to her. :)

So for being very \"stimulating\" in addition to also being well-written and entertaining, babygrrl gets an \"O\" for \"Outstanding\". :)
person Anon
schedule June 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Thanks, that was cool. A decent plot, a rare and interesting pairing (so tired already of most fics being HP/SS and HP/DM).

The only part tfeltfelt unnatural, I think, was oral sex. She is probably too young and inexperienced to dream about oral sex with Ron. :)
person Jaelyss
schedule May 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I haven\'t read a lot of Ron/Ginny but this is very good. You are a good writer. I hope you write more of the stuff. There\'s something so smutty yet angstworthy in this pairing. Good job.
person ingrid
schedule May 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
reminds me of \"the secret lives of altar boys\". repulsed? should be. why aren\'t i? allowed my mind to play with me. which reminds me, i should start on my own work.
person tom4eva
schedule April 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
like it alot!!! i dont like incest but this was soo far goood can u make a hermione + draco plz???

continue!!
lotsa xxx!!!
person Camilla Bloom
schedule April 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
GGGGGooood! You\'re on that bus too \'em? Hehehe. Small squick: Ginny has brown eyes, but don\'t let that stop them. *g*

Very enjoyable. Extremely enjoyable.
person NAPPA
schedule March 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
:) Liked it :)

NAPPA
person Tankgirl
schedule March 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Now it\'s me who is lost. Oh dear lord! That was unbelievebly sweet and painfull. Thank you so much... *wanders off mumbling incoherently*
person cimerone
schedule March 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was really good...
person Archchancellor
schedule March 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very good. Is this going to be a one shot fic or are they more chapters to come?