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for The Rescue

by Tarie

person Nem
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cute :)
person scully
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was really good! i loved harry\'s internal dialogue with himself.
person Anon
schedule December 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is very good. Unfortunately, it seems to be cut off at the end.
person amniarix
schedule October 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh now thats a first time story, very imaginative. love the under the invisibility cloak bit in the library. what a turn on, great story.
person spaz141
schedule October 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
thanks
person gal-texter
schedule October 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
And here's another rec!

http://recs.portkey.org/myrec.php?rec_id=1089&order=post_date&direction=DESC&view=&submit=sort

person Kuno-baby (not logged in)
schedule October 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whew! I wish someone wouls rescue ME from the library like that! Hot story. I hope there's more?!!!
person danielerin
schedule October 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Is there more? That was fantastic! Really, really good. This is a believable first-time thing for them - not really talking about it, just letting it happen. And Ron's ambiguity is also much more believable than other versions. Great job. Thanks for sharing! Wish you'd continue on!
person Creepy Susie
schedule October 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very Erotic and Very Sexy!
Kudos to you!
person rubberduck
schedule October 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was hot and fun and exciting. actually one of the best smutty scenes i've ever read. but i need more. i need for you to continue this. there has to be more harry and hermione action. i know you want to write more too. i can see it in your eyes (if i could see your eyes that is) so, quickly now, write more. please? thanks.