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for Scarlet Pain

by AsheCrow

person Read300300
schedule January 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for e-mailing me about your update! It was very much appreciated. I like this chapter a lot; it really made me think. I really can\'t wait to see what happens in the last detention of the week, seeing as how all of the other detentions were very intriguing. I really loved how in the one of the detentions Snape completely threw Harry for a loop whenever he let go after Harry asked. That whole scene was amazing. It was filled with conflicting emotions of such depth that I was really concerned for my sanity at the end of it. You know it had to have been good if it threatens my whole veiw on the world! I really loved that scene because it completely screwed around with my head for days after I read it; I kept thinking and dwelling on how it was possible to write such emotions in that manner, and I came up blank. What really messed with my mind was that at the end, after Snape let go, Harry realized that he missed the contact. It really showed how love-starved he is if he misses being touched by someone that he was terrified of at the time. The emotional clarity shone through in the way that you phrased it.

*realizes that she just went off into a tangent about something irrelevant to the chapter* Whoops! Well.... *coughs* back to this chapter. I liked the conversation between Harry and Draco, especially at the end when Harry asked to see Draco\'s arms. It reminded me of something that my friends have done, especially since Harry had an ulterior motive. That definitely rang of truth!

Overall, this chapter (and story) is incredible. I really, truly love it!
person Sarah
schedule December 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!!! I mean, I LOVE this story! Your writing is sooo amazing! I would love it if you could e-mail me when you update and include a link to the new chappie. I would be very appreciative!
schedule December 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Coolsa.
person aewnaur
schedule December 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh please update soon.. i so want to see harry in his next detention with snape .. not to mention the occulmency lessons.. great story i am simply addicted.. aewnaur
person eyes0nme19
schedule December 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love your story...!! keep up the good work :)
person trixy
schedule December 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m absolutely in love with your story. Please, please please update soon!!!!!
person Sailor Aurora
schedule November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this was awesome! and so sad too... :(

would you please e-mail me to inform me of a update on your story, if it isn\'t too much trouble?
person Tsuki Kage
schedule November 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon! I just found this story, and already its got me enthralled ^^. Are you emailing readers when you update? That'd be great if you did ^^, but I'll check sooner or later! This is a great read, and I hope you are planning on getting the next chappie up to soothe the rabid reader ^.~
person Jewel
schedule October 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
woot! you updated, wanna do it again?
love it!
person Jewel
schedule October 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yes i'm enjoying this ficcy so far, so please update asap!!!