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for What He Does To Me

by CaelinRhoswen

person woof
schedule October 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
aahhh urlp nuhhhh oh my!! they should let that boy out more often!!!
person BoB
schedule October 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love your story, I love the deteal you use. You make me feel like i am acctuly there.. Please contuine to write storys like these!
person DDMalfoy
schedule October 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don't usually read Sirius stories, because I don't like him, but you did a good job with this. You kept them both in character. The only complaint I have is the Author's Notes within the story. When you read a story, you try to get into what is happening, and these little notes really kill the mood.

If you have a comment, please put it at the end, it does not belong within the body fo the story.