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I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Great metaphorical uses of book, spider and web. Sigh, the excellence of its forerunner is not lost here (oops, Miltonian reference merely a slip). It would not surprise me to find that Dumbldore has had the perspicacity, even in his waning years, to spirit the innocent \'moth\' to what he percieves is safety, a hostage for Snape\'s continued allegiance. The question is whether she is willing to keep from either the flame or the web. I confess that I was surprised that he did not lick the blood, savoring the evidence of his pain and grounding his reality.

I'm so happy you are continuing 'String Quartet'! This first chapter has me hooked immediately, as you are writing very subtle about what is happening... I'm looking forward to reading more! What happened to Hermione?