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for Protector

by freakenbree

person Katie K
schedule October 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dang... you just HAD to say five different people. Of course, I could think up names and type out other reviews, but I wouldn't do that. But please DO update! I thi this story so much! The only problem I have is that you say things like Snape could feel a stirring in his lions...lions are big cats with manes... you mean loins... sorry, I'm a perfectionist, repeated errors with spelling irritate me. But seriously, I love this story so much! Please update soon. If yon'ton't, I might just have to hunt you down and tickle you to death. :)
person Joey
schedule October 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very sweet story, are you in the market for a beta?
person Bree
schedule October 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Roger that! Hey, thanks for the spelling correction. I was wondering about that. See usually I use other words, but I tried that one and wasn't thinking when I typed it. I was having a controversy with my brain and my fingers. This is why I try to proof read my stuff. At one point I wrotenapenape saw the boy the was on the boy.' Crazy eh? Okay, so starting today, I will start on the new chapter. Critisism is much appreciated! I like to improve. Thanks to all those who've been reading, I am soon going to come out with a new HP/SS slash,watcwatch for that as well. This is partly why it takes me longer to do these chapters.
person Krystal925
schedule October 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please continue! Pretty please?
person Katie K
schedule October 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you didn't say
person Katie K
schedule October 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that the five
person Anon
schedule October 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
reviews had to
person Katie K
schedule October 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
be from five
person Katie K
schedule October 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
different people. :-P Sorry about the third review, forgot to type my name. Please please please update!!! I am completely addicted to this story!
person Bree
schedule October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes, which I shall elaborate on in the upcoming chapter. I know I haven't made much clear in this chapter, but it will all fall in the next chapter. So continue to review. I still need four more!