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person maggie
schedule October 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe, my god, I almost peed my pants this story is so funny, I was lucky not to spew the tea I was drinking all over my computer screen. This is totally brilliant
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person genrou
schedule October 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love your delieverence. its so hilarious and so strong and you just get so absorbed. its just perfect for this fic. see with lines like "What the fuck was that? WHAT THE FUCK WAS THAT?" perfect. ^____^ and to your word i get a new chap a day. itll be sad when its over.

person genrou
schedule October 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh god i almost died. man this fic is os bloody awesome. "Snape had licked his ear!" holy shit thatll terrify me too. and then when the whole quidditch team was approaching him..*tears in eyes* and then when he was questiong if/how granger was going to rape him...
bloody marvelous.
person Deanna
schedule October 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's grossly unfair that you haven't gotten ANY revies yet, but you're over 1,000 hits. Don't worry, the story is well written, the plot is interesting and people ARE reading you're work. They're just too lazy to tell you so! Keep it up, I'm interested in what happens next.
person Deanna
schedule October 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's grossly unfair that you haven't gotten ANY reviews yet, but you're over 1,000 hits. Don't worry, the story is well written, the plot is interesting and people ARE reading your work. They're just too lazy to tell you so! Keep it up, I'm interested in what happens next.
person Mercedes
schedule October 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really hope that this review goes through. Could you let me know if it does? I really want to tell you what I think of your story and if you don't let me know then I guess I will have to email it to you but since I have a cold I could forget and then I would feel bad. Okay, on to the review.

I love this story it is by far one of the funnier Draco Veela stories I have ever read. So far the only issue I seem to have is them using vegetables in their ons ons but that is only because I keep wondering if they are making a stew and are going to share it with me so I don't have to cook dinner. Oh, you did have me confused for a bit in the 3rd chapter, but that is because of the cold I have, it took longer for my brain to function properly and click into place. When Draco runs into Harry, you originally called Harry Weasel and I was wondering how Ron became the Boy Who Lived, but like I said it was the cold. So, your story is great and I can't wait for the next chapter.
person scifichick774
schedule October 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So this is working again...maybe? Love that Hermione figured things out and that she wasn't just falling prey to his 'seductive powers'. Can't wait to see what happens next.
person triospleasure
schedule October 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is my 5th attempt to review this FAboo fic.

I love it...........
Trio
person Triospleasure
schedule October 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok I'm a little pissed.

Now ,"I" reviewed this fic chapter by chapter everyday faithfully. The damn thing (AFF) would not let me post!!!

Don't think you didn't have any reviews ,you did.

Probably Alot .

Just look at how many you got in one day.
So AFF must not have let anyone else post either.

Your use of the vella blood was unique.I am a HUGE vella/draco fan. The bunny tailnow now that was ..inspired.

Strait and attracted to men...Priceless

Trio


person Polar Thestral
schedule October 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LOL! This is the funniest story I have read for a long time. Your prose is wonderfully full of wit, it reads like a stream of thoughts. Wonderful. I also like how you've taken a cliche story and slanted it to the extent it has become really original. Not too many writers can pull that off. I really am hanging out impatiently waiting to see where you take this.

Hugs,

B xxx