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person scifichick774
schedule October 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*snicker* Still feel bad for Harry; oddly enough, not so much for Draco though. Looking forward to more.
person Mercedes
schedule October 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The sad thing is that I probably would want the stew with toad legs in it, but only if I was hungry and had no desire to cook or even order food. The Ron thing, it just never dawned on me that he was there and nontiontioned again as saying something else. I guess I am so used to fics where Ron always has a snide comment that it didn't register.

Onto my review of this chapter. I loved it. It was so much fun. Even though I am not a huge slash fan, I liked how you wrote it. It was very tasteful and not too graphic. I have a very visual mind and was extremely thankful that is was so tasteful because I could picture it better without thinking of a porn film gone wrong. I do that with some of the stories I've read because they are so graphic and crude that it ruins it for me. Now, I 've been meaning to comment on the bunny tail. I love the bunny tail, I can see this really hot Draco with a bunny tail. It works for him, the bunny tail. I just like saying bunny tail. I can't wait for you next chapter and I will try to respond to each chapter, but if I get behind then chances are I will respond after reading a couple of chapters.
schedule October 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I read the whole thing, and god. this is amazing. I love it. talk about a whole new twist to the whole draco!veela thing. I laughed out loud several times, especially when the guys start to hit on draco. poor him btw. and a question, why a bunny tail? does it have to do with him wanting to shag like a bunny or something else?

love it and I can't wait for more. and I really can't wait for the dramione stuff to start happen, judging from the rest of the story so far, I know its going to be good.

Ree
person amniarix
schedule October 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Once again another Padfoot the Marauder comic creation to tickle our fancy (and other spots!). Very creative story, it says M/F in the header, as I dont really read M/M I hope that its not incorrectly labeled. Well maybe just a M/M kiss, Harrry all confused is very sweet lol.
person Inell
schedule October 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story just puts this huge grin on my face and I eagerly read more, giggling about Draco's reactions the entire time! *grin*

Inell
person psr
schedule October 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Loved the new chapters! Yeah, it's not what I'd call funny Ha I waI was just in a giggly mood that night. My mom, who's 69yrs old, read the story to see what all the laughing was about and ended up hogging the computer so she could read the whole thing. I think I've created a monster.
person MADA
schedule October 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG, LOLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL
person Ning
schedule October 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I hope this turns out to be a Draco/Hermione smut...
But, moving on, I love the comedic scenes.
*sigh* And here where Draco doesn't like being a heartthrob. Haha.
person Semperputus
schedule October 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok I was worried with the Harry thing but you got me intrigued. The yeast infection thing made me laugh out loud.
So is Hermione going to beating of the male population of Hogwarts to protect her man. I'd be tempted to look him in a hidden room in the dungeon with me of course:)
person Jules
schedule October 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Other bei being severly traumatized by the though of Snape licking Draco's ear - *smirk* - this is a great story.
I also think I know why Hermione is unaffected ;)
Am patirently waiting for smut. Please continue!