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person NightSiren
schedule October 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I DO feel quite clever. And there was a typo that made me laugh really hard for no reason whatsoever. I think it was, you typed "yaw" instead of "jaw". I have no way to explain WHY I found that so funny, but it did make me laugh. Oh, and bed-head Draco? So cute. Hermione sounds like a quirkyalone. Quirkyalones (in case you don't know) are romantics who resist the tyranny of coupledom. Whether by birth (womb quilonelones) or through life experience (born-again quirkyalones), they are independent-thinking people who would prefer to be open to finding that magical click (and the myriad possibilities that life has to offer) rather than exist in a stifling or unsatisfying romantic relationship. I'm a quirkyalone/quirkyslut so I can safely say that Hermione woul wel well within her bounds as a quirkyalone to fall for Draco. Because they're just so cute, and their wit and sex life would be satisfying. Unless you decide to pull a Hemingway and make Draco and his play-boy bunny tail impotent.
person NightSiren
schedule October 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Is Harry, the one that's it in the bed with Draco, really Harry? I was thinking Hermione might be forced to use a Polyjuice Potion or something of the sort... Actually, never mind, I think that theory's out. Polyjuice Potion takes a while to make (I think). That'd be cute if it is Harry. Even Hermione. This whole story is adorable, aside from the creepy tail factor. I don't fancy tails. It'd just be weird... Well, lovely story. Glad you update daily. Please don't drop pianos on the reviewers heads, even if they aren't very trusting, because then you'd lose a lot of reviews. And find horse heads in one's bead is just down right icky.

-Gina
person Mercedes
schedule October 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whee!!!!!!!!!!! This chapter was so much fun. I knew when Draco hated Luna that it was because she was threatening his mate. Great fun. I really loved how Hermione jumped in Draco's back in the middle of the Great Hall. All I have to say to that is, CAN I BE HERMIONE, CAN I CAN I PLEASE????? I REALLY WANT TO BE HERMIONE!!!!!! Okay, now that that is over with, is Draco going to kiss Hermione? How are you going to get them together in the end? If Veela's are only female, how do we get full-blood Veelas? (In regards to the HP books not your story, but maybe you have answered this question for your story incas someone like me asks it) Do they lay eggs or something? Speaking of eggs, which came first, the Veela or the egg? And lastly, why did the Draco cross the road?

Okay, no more review for me when I am under the influence of cold medications, especially when said cold medicine is ComaQuill... I mean NyQuil.
person the earth guide
schedule October 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am dying laughing here! This is hilarious. I like veela fics but in truth, the story line has become someone cliche already but this story has an intersting twist that makes it fresh and enjoyable. I LOVE your Hermione - she is exactly as I would imagine her being like in that situation. I did have a Ginny question, is there any particular reason why she's attracted to Malfoy even though she's female? Also, it is labeled as a Hermione/Draco fic. Is this a mistake? I know you mentioned putting up warning on slash scene (they don't bother me a bit) but that didn't seem to clarify if this is a fic about D/HP or D/HG. Anyway, update soon!

person robin
schedule October 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love it. i have read a lot draco fan fic but this is curenlty my fav. keep it up.
person genrou
schedule October 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
pep keep harrassing you on the dm/hg bit , eh? i think its quite obvious how theyll end up-but maybe im just more intuned to it.
suprised though the boys didnt jump each other in that proxiimity-he must have been extremely tired. though..just what did hermione say to harry to get him to go?
person Inell
schedule October 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Still just adore this more than I can express, darling! It puts a much needed smile on my face! As for D/Hr, I so trust you so I've not worried at all about the bits of D/H, instead finding them more amusing than cringe inducing :)

Inell
person the earth guide
schedule October 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well I didn't mean to piss you off by asking about teh D/HG aspect of the story! Just that, you never know as authors frequently change their minds as they are writing. In truth I was hoping that you might hint at how the D/HG relationship would develop as on the surface it is not clear. My first thought was perhaps after the month of May his "mating instincts" would wear off and he might turn to HG. But now I would guess that HG somehow took polyjuice to look like H and this might be the start of their relationship. Honestly though, I am dying to see how this turns out! I am glad you update so often.

person kbluesmom
schedule October 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good build up to the DM/HG part. About Draco being a veela..do their choice in mates change every May or is it one for life? Just asking... thanx.
person scifichick774
schedule October 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sorry you're getting lots of questions on when the Draco/Hermione pairing is going to come up, but in general I think a lot of people have trouble accepting one part of their ship actively pursuing/interested in someone else. Really hope that it doesn't dissuade you from writing, because I would like to see how you're going to make Hermione feel anything but pity for Draco (which it seems like she's feeling right now).