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" She was getting quite tired of constantly casting smell-repelling charms on herself, so Malfoy wouldn

OHMGOSH! It's really really bad when I actuaget get a giddy feeling that you've updated. AT first I was like - oh, another update. I hope there are more... and now I'm more along the lines of "HOLY CRAP! MORE MORE MORE!"

You dis a great job with virginal Hermione. It is so overwhelming those first few times. *CHEERING*

Please update soon!
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Karena Elizabeth

Really good! A nice new veiw to both charaters. Congrads! Anywho updated soon! TTUL
~Kya

dear lord. you've no idea how many times i've laughed and gasped while reading this story. Dear jeebus, poor kids! wow, to have one's ear licked by snape: good yet bad. you've a very fantastic imagination as well as a marvelous ability to write. The mixture of comedy and sensuality that you've infused is perfect. Simple phrases and words make the story come alive. I have to admit that i was disappointed when i found that there were only 9 chapters as of yet.

anywhos, major kudos!!

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There's a whole book on quirkyalones. I felt quite the same way when I chanced upon the book. And English isn't your first language and you write such wonderful stories? Amazing. Anyway, this chapter was very cute, hot boy on boy action and all (actually that was REALLY enjoyable). Just, even though Draco wasn't going to be a Veela in like, an hour after that bath, wouldn't he still be able to smell Hermione's arousal, or whatever it was that he could smell, like when Luna walked by Harry? Or he was he not a Veela then? No, wait, he had curly hair... so I guess he was. Could he smell it before when she was attracted to him? Oh, and she didn't even look at his bunny tail (of course, if I was bathing Draco, who was sporting a massive erection, I don't think I'd look at the bunny tail either). Side note: Veela's have bunny tails? I missed that in one oose ose HP books. Does that mean Fleur has a bunny tail? Hmm...

i liked the bunny tail, and the puppy thing.i happen to think that a harry /draco pairing would be really hot. personally i like draco/ginny pairings, but i think hermione could heat things up for him or them.

I love this story... hermione is going to come up witha polyjuice plan towithwith draco i just know it. then draco will decide he actually likes her once his mating period is over... :)

What an amazing chapter I loved it.
What is Draco going to do when he finds out Hermione broke her promise if they fall out please make it quick I don't think I can stand a long seperation. Draco with curls not sure if I agree with that but thanks again for updating so regually keep it up

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Bloody Hell! This is so fucking good and so hilarious. Please update soon! Love it!