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person Danielle
schedule October 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww, OMG, that was soooooooooooooooooooooo sad!! I sheded a tear!!! Update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!
person em
schedule October 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was amazing...I wan't to know why Draco feels guilty!!
Poor Hermione...
person Night Siren
schedule October 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah, Draco screwed up royally! That poor, gorgeous slytherin. Maybe I should comfort him? Ah, well, I will be waiting anxiously for you next chapter, because they just need to...well, fuck. Toodles!
person robin
schedule October 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
best DM HG fic i hav ever had the plesure of reading!!!!!!!!!!
keep it up im on the edge of my seat and about to fall off :D
person Triospleasure
schedule October 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was the shit!!! I love this story.

GOOOOOD job kept them in character.

BTW.

I would have read the H/D sex scene and bronzed it!!!

This was so good I'm gonna make you a pic of Draco as a Veela . I'll post it on Quiet ones /http://groups.yahoo.com/group/quietones/

Ineill ill get the joke.

Trio
person triospleasure
schedule October 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's done go see.

http://groups.yahoo.com/group/quietones/

Ha, Couldn't get the tail on so I threw it away....


Trio
person semperputus
schedule October 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Amazing bloody amazing it just gets better Draco with Guilt what's the guy to do. Sad to find oit only five more chapters to go.
Can't wait for next chapter.
schedule October 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I do the same thing, not posting till I'm done. usually that's because I change stuff as I go along, and then I might have to go back and change something and yeah..

and god I loved this chapter. draco was so totally in character, at least the character I've pictured him as, and hermione? oh, poor thing. never having had an orgasm. well, good thing draco's there to fix that problem. and draco feels guilty? oh boy, can't wait for more and I am so happy that you've already written the chapter (I'm assuming since I doubt the next chapter is the last one) since I don't want to have to wait long...what? I'm very eager to see where this goes next. ::grins::

love it.

Ree
person Sachiko
schedule October 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I get uncontrollable urges to giggle, chuckle. and say "Aww" every couple of
paragraphs whenever I come back to this story.
Oh man, Draco just took advge oge of Hermione's attraction to him...
I don't want to be around if she ever finds out. Enraged Hermione - RUN!
Can't wait for the next chappie. And the next.

~Sachiko
person scifichick774
schedule October 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, man. Poor Hermione - not for the orgasm, but for having to break down in front of Draco like that. Well, at least he felt guilty. Looking forward to more. :)