schedule
October 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aw! What a fantastic story! I stumbled upon while taking a break from some work ... After reading all of the chapters that you have posted, I think that I should be getting back to my work ...
schedule
October 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh no!!! I want to know the prophecy!!!
schedule
October 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
the CRUELTY the CRUELTY (weeping) you are so mean. how could you leave it like that? (pouting) Oh well Ill just have to wait for the next chapter. please update soon. this is a great story.
schedule
October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great story i love it please continue and update soon. i love the byplay between severus and hermione. update soon please
schedule
October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! this chapter was fantastic. I really liked Severus and Hermione's conversation. I also like that Harry and Ron are being supportive, and not bratty about this. I'm glad you had Hermione tell them what he goes through what with classes, potions making and spying. I think it did a lot to open the boys eyes.
I can't wait for the next chapter, since you left us with an evil cliffy!
I can't wait for the next chapter, since you left us with an evil cliffy!
schedule
October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
No! You can't just...just...leave us hanging like that! How DARE you! I am absolutely furious...you simply have no idea...
Cheers on the chapter anyway, though! I liked it. I like how you're making Severus more congenial than most do. He actually acts like a civilized, half-way decent human being...not the 'greasy git' everyone makes out like he is. Good job! Keep up the good work and update again soon...*voice drops and brandishes wand threateningly*...or else...
~CR
Cheers on the chapter anyway, though! I liked it. I like how you're making Severus more congenial than most do. He actually acts like a civilized, half-way decent human being...not the 'greasy git' everyone makes out like he is. Good job! Keep up the good work and update again soon...*voice drops and brandishes wand threateningly*...or else...
~CR
schedule
October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ch 6 - don't ask me why, but it really made me laugh to read Severus' comment about Trelawney:
schedule
October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have a crush on your story, please update soon.
Icy
Icy
schedule
October 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice story! I really like the little twists and turns in the plot that you've included. Keeps us readers on our toes! ^_^ I like the characterization you've used to show Snape's and Hermione's personalities. They seem very real and well-rounded. I also like how Snape is not being extremely nasty to Hermione. At times I think that people exaggerate that a bit...but anyway...good story. I hope you update again soon. Please, if you would, e-mail me and tell me when you do. I would be very grateful.
~CR
P.S. You can count on me to continue reading and reviewing. ^_^
~CR
P.S. You can count on me to continue reading and reviewing. ^_^
schedule
October 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying your story so far. You have a great plot and you're taking Snape and Hermione's "relationship" at the right pace. Please keep updating, this fic is wonderful.