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by selened

person ancientgirl
schedule October 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Selened, that was a fantastic chapter. I'm very worried about Albus, and hoping he will be okay. Not liking Harry or Ron, but Iely ely do in many fics. I'm very happy Severus has decided to give Hermione and himself a chance for a future. I'm keeping my fingers crossed things don't get too crazy.
person xena
schedule October 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*Smacks lips* Delicious story and I'll leave it at that.
person June
schedule October 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ch 8 - omigosh, a sick Albus! Severus is right, the Order does need someone to be Albus' "second in command" if only to keep Moody from killing Sevrus. I hope h gets better soon.
person Sabrina
schedule October 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think this story is great. Please update soon.
person hopelsydreaming
schedule October 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aw! What a crule way to end the chapter ... He kisses her? And she 'understands'? You can't leave us hanging like that!
person Anon
schedule October 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very promising. Looking forward to more.
person June
schedule October 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ch 7 - "led to torture in the pit of snakes" - I thought that meant Slytherin House! I'm glad Severus is being so logical - he doesn't refuse the possibility of a relationship with her, but acknowledges they do have to concentrate on their work for now. But he kisses her anyway - yay!
person CarnalRhapsody
schedule October 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aww! That was so sweet! I can't be myal sal serious, reviewer self after this chapter! Severus and Hermione are just too cute and great together, and the way you write them is awesome. Wonderful job and thank you so much for e-mailing me to tell me that you updated! Hope to read more from you in the very near future.

~CR
person CarnalRhapsody
schedule October 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aww! That was so sweet! I can't be my usual serious, reviewer self after this chapter! Severus and Hermione are just too cute and great together, and the way you write them is awesome. Wonderful job and thank you so much for e-mailing me to tell me that you updated! Hope to read more from you in the very near future.

~CR
person CarnalRhapsody
schedule October 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aww! That was so sweet! I can't be my usual serious, reviewer self after this chapter! Severus and Hermione are just too cute and great together, and the way you write them is awesome. Wonderful job and thank you so much for e-mailing me to tell me that you updated! Hope to read more from you in the very near future.

~CR