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Looks to me as if Fawkes has made the choice already on who\'s going to be leader next. That was a great way to end this chapter. It added a bit of momentary calm and pause after all the stress and emotions. Great job! Hope you update again soon because I can\'t wait to read more. You\'re really a good writer, you know that?

~CR

Hello,

I really like your story. You have done a wonderful job with it. Keep up the great work. I\'m sure you will get more reviews. I just now got to read it. Sometimes my comp is slow on up dating things. Lol. If you end um moving the story will you please let me know. I would really like to know what happens. ^_^ Well, I\'m sorry. I have to get ready for school. Keep it up. Bye.


Polo

Great chapter...I was so sad that Albus passed but now I am seeing the potintial. Completely understand the site frustration.

Don\'t think it\'s so much wasting time, as having access problems. I\'ve tried to leave several reviews in the past two weeks with only limited success. I\'m getting time outs. I\'m enjoying the story and look forward to more installments.

I love this story and look forward to each update. Please continue.

Well, it was was a pleasure to return after several weeks without a computer and find an update to this terrific story. I am particularly taken with Moody\'s irrational reaction to Severus - what an interesting villian he might be. Harry and Ron seem ripe for mischief and I can imagine that they\'d be willing to help Severus find Hermione in spite of the Order\'s other \"pressing needs\".

Now that I\'m home and back to a computer I\'ll be hoping for more updates - that\'s enough of a cliffhanger to keep me on the edge of my seat for a while....

klo

I agree with Severus\' reasons for leaving the order but they need to stick together. the bit with fawkes was pretty cool too.

I think you have a great story. You did a great job with Sevs character. Moody doesn\'t seems to have his own agend and it\'s good to see people stick up for Sev. Keep up the good work!

I\'m sorry you\'ve not received any reviews. I\'ll give you mine right now. I\'ve only just found the story, sorry I didn\'t find it sooner. I\'m enjoying it very much.

I hope you continue, despite the lack of reviews. I know that I frequently don\'t review because I\'m not an author myself and all I can really say is, \"love the story! Good job!\" After a while i began to feel foolish offering nebulous, if sincere, praise after *every chapter* of stories I liked - so I stopped. I can\'t offer concrit but I will say that if you\'re going to let lack of reviews stop you, it\'s unfortunate... I think your writing deserves to stand on its own.

I will also tell you that the tone of your request put me off a bit. Many of us are just here to enjoy marvelous writing, not to give literary critiques (personally I don\'t feel I\'m qualified!). So please: don\'t chide us. Or, maybe only chide the author-types and not the groundlings. We\'re just crouching here in the semidarkness waiting for the play\'s next act. :)

I really like your stories and I would donate if I could. It is real hard to find really good stories and I would have to see it end. Believe me if I could I would.