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for A Working Relationship

by selened

person CarnalRhapsody
schedule December 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! You write the characters so well and I love the action that you put in every chapter. ^_^ I\'m actually glad that Hermione didn\'t kill Lucius. It shows that she still doesn\'t stoop to their level. Great job and I\'m so glad that you updated!!!! I was worried that you wouldn\'t finish.

Please update again soon!

~Jessica
person Kimberley
schedule December 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW! Great story you have here. :) I\'m hooked-- and waiting for the next chapter. ^.^
person Sabrina
schedule December 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great work. Please update soon.
person June
schedule December 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ch 18 - amazing chapter!!!! So glad they\'ve succeeded and so quickly after what Hermione endured. I just hope you update soon - must find out what happened to Hermione. Thanks for the chapter!!
person Sabine
schedule December 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hello,

I read this fic from the beginning to the end, but I hope you will go on writing, this can\'t be the end, or is it?
So, I really love your fic, I was totaly lost in this story, almost feeling with Hermione in the last chapters.

PLEASE go on writing, your such a good writer.

Greets, Sabine
person Pankhurst
schedule December 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant story, can\'t wait to see the form that revenge will take!
person Lianon
schedule December 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good story, I can\'t wait for more! I wish I had money to give you to make you work faster, but I don\'t, and inspiration cannot be forced. So all I can do is beg for you to update quickly, and hope a girl on her knees is enough!
person cryingoddess
schedule December 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
continue! :)
person sweet surrender
schedule December 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aside from the spelling errors in the earlier chapters, and the rude, commanding, and manipulative author\'s notes, this frantic is excellent. I found myself laughing out loud many times. There was good character build up, and the story is original, which is pleasing. I hope you continue to update at this brick pace.
person The Ascendant
schedule December 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love how the last reviewer complained about your spelling errors and made at least 2 in that review alone. Yeah you had some spelling errors in the beginning, yeah you were a real bitch in the author\'s notes, but the story is still good.
I also find it interesting that people will apologize for not reviewing afraid that you will stop updating...as if their lives will end if you don\'t update. Trust me guys...you\'ll get over it. This is an -excellent- story with a very interesting plot. Your writing is supurb. But your attitude is abhorrent. One can only hope that eventually, the quality in which you treat your readers will match the quality of your writing.