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for A Working Relationship

by selened

person Katie
schedule October 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just started reading these fanfics and I was enjoying yours greatly, I even saved the link on my computer so that I could check back for the next chapter, I hope you post it :-)

-Katie

person Hidden Reviewer
schedule October 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's a good story, better than quite a few of the offerings I've read lately and good enough to entice me to review. =) I would like to see more though, lol How soon can you get me the rest of the story?
person Anon
schedule October 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
There are many reasons that people don't review, lack of time, lack of knowledge about what to say, and then sometimes the system just doesn't work and the reviews are not recieved. For you to essentially extort reviews from readers that may not be able to review is annoying. I personally will not bedingding anything more by you, and hope that you get a better attitude and understanding of the readers.
person beeky63
schedule October 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
My sincere apologies for not reviewing your story which I am most definately enjoying. I like to review a story upon its completion giving an overall opinion. I think your story is interesting. captivating and well written, and I eagerly await more updates as Severus and Hermione's relationship developes. Keep up the good work.
person Anon
schedule October 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That's rather snotty. :( I've been trying to post a review but it wasn't working.

I love the fic. Please write more.
person GeekGoddess
schedule October 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow...bummer....I just found your story on Ashwinder (yes I reviewed there), but was checking here to see if any of my favorites had been updated and saw a new chapter of this one.....I was disappointed to see that it wasn't a new chapter......I'm sorry that no one has been leaving you reviews here....its a fantastic story and I am really hooked on it now wanting to find out what happens next.

Well good luck on here and I hope you get enough reviews to post the new chapter soon.
person June
schedule October 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ch "5" - not sure if this website is accepting reviews yet, but I have tried leaving reviews. YES, I am reading your lovely story, although I will read it at whichever site is currently working, whether ist is here at adultfan, or potionmaster/whispers, or ashwinder. [I prefer the whispers for legibility, but will read at whichever site posts the newest chapters first. The whispers site is pretty quick, since it's not moderated.]
person HyattSLU
schedule October 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nooooo!!! I like this story. It's one of the few decently writen ones out there.Please, Please post the next chapter.
person Ann
schedule October 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just finished reading your story and the last chapter made me laugh, so I am reviewing - if nothing else so you will know how much I have enjoyed your story. I hope you post the conclusion, I am curious to see what the talk is about!
Thank you,
Ann
person froggirl
schedule October 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I love the story. I just found it while randomly surfing. I like the way the story is going so far. I am also happy to see you aren't making Hermionl inl in your face :) . Please keep writing and I'll try to post reviews. Thanks for the story :)