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for A Working Relationship

by selened

person Anon
schedule October 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
An intriguing chapter. I hope to see more!
person Kate
schedule October 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just came across your story last evening. You offer believable characterizations and an intriguing, promising plot line. As a fic writer myself, I know how frustrating it can be to receive only a smattering of reviews for your efforts. If it helps, I think this is a very well-written piece and really do look forward to seeing how Severus and Hermione develop this 'working relationship.' Please post again soon.
person Anon
schedule October 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm reviewing! And I say update!
person Anon
schedule October 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
no, we're reading! it's really good! please post!
person ancientgirl
schedule October 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I loved that little bit about her asking him for moral guidance. I also agree, they have to explain her being in his office somehow, after all, Lucius will most certainly start talking. I mean Draco already knows, so chances are the whole school will have found out by dinnertime.
person AB
schedule October 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. One of the best ones I've read so far. :)
person Shiro Ryu
schedule October 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!
Thank you!
I look forward to your next update.
^_^
person spaz141
schedule October 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
My loyalty cannot be questioned, I am a fan. I will read and review where ever you want.
Please don't give up on the story. Good writers with integrity(sp) are far and few between in
fandom.

Sincerely,
Spaz
person June W
schedule October 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ch 5 - I'm glad Hermione is being ratl abl about things. Will she study independently for her NEWTs, maybe take them early? Nice to see Ron and Harry taking the news semi-well; I just hope they can keep their mouths shut and keep up the "acting pleased" part. So now you'll tell us what the projects are? And will they ever find out how Lucius sneaked through? That's rather scary, the idea of Lucius popping in at any time! Thanks for the cookie...umm, chapter! :=)
person Shiro Ryu
schedule October 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sorry about the reviews. I tried, but the review system wasn't working. I have only been able to successfully leave a review for the last two days. Anyway, what I tried to say is that I love your story, and I am so glad that you started a new one! I hope you continue! ^_^