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January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story,good job
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this was very very good and i hope severus and isabelle get together
keep going and post soon
bye bye
keep going and post soon
bye bye
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I realy loved reading this story. it was really good
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December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this was very very good keep going and post soon bye bye
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August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Keep it going. Though the pairings aren\'t to my liking, I\'m curious to c where this leads and how(if) the reactions change when ppl know that its Harry\'s sister.
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July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nobody reveiwed! People are such assholes.
I like the plot, but the writing is kind of.. I dun know, mechanical. Maybe that\'s not right, but - it\'s kind of like a script, maybe. If it was a script, actors would infuse character and feelings. But without... You don\'t say much about thoughts, and it\'s all kind of... like your telling someone, word for word practically, what happened, but it\'s not like it\'s actually HAPPENING. You get me? I\'m not at all that confident about giving advice, what I\'m saying I think I\'m right but not at all sure. But I know something\'s missing. I wouldn\'t mind helping if you wanted, mail me.
I like the plot, but the writing is kind of.. I dun know, mechanical. Maybe that\'s not right, but - it\'s kind of like a script, maybe. If it was a script, actors would infuse character and feelings. But without... You don\'t say much about thoughts, and it\'s all kind of... like your telling someone, word for word practically, what happened, but it\'s not like it\'s actually HAPPENING. You get me? I\'m not at all that confident about giving advice, what I\'m saying I think I\'m right but not at all sure. But I know something\'s missing. I wouldn\'t mind helping if you wanted, mail me.