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person Kat
schedule May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was NOT what I had expected. It makes me so sad at the end, and i truely hate feeling that way. Brilliant writing, by the way.
person Death in a Pink Boa
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very Good. I cried at the end.
person Arianbrightside
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow!
What a brilliant piece of writing - so very evocative and descriptive.
I felt like you got right inside Draco, right down to the core of what made him tick. You explored his motives and feelings excellently.
Moreover, it developed at a cracking pace - starting out as just idle correspondence, and getting deeper and deeper as each letter was written.
I thoroughly enjoyed reading it, you\'re a very gifted writer.

Much love,
Arian
xoxo
person Anata
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness! I never thought I would enjoy a completely onesided fic written in letter format. And yet, here I am, reviewing this and putting it on my recommendations. I\'m not sure how to explain my reaction to this, but it was a bit refreshing to only have it from one perspective. This was cute and funny at times, lonely and depressing at others, and, where it was most important, sweet and fulfilling. I must say, you have an excellent grasp into the human psyche; the way you show his feelings, his reactions - how they must have been thought out! - to all that we surmised Harry was writing...it was incredibly believable. He was no longer a character on a page; he was Draco Malfoy. He was human, and I loved him for that. You warped him for your own puposes, yet you kept him exactly the same; his cockiness, his decisions, his troubles, his pains. I believed them all.
Oh, and the ending! It was so beautiful; a painting of every wonderful, yet sorrowful human emotion, of letting go and holding on, of love. This, above all, gave me an intense feeling of love as real as it can be portrayed in words. The fact that you left it to be inferred that they would be together was a wonderful lift. It was amazing. Simply amazing.
person Web of Silence
schedule March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omg. I don\'t even know what to say to this. This has to be the best Harry/Draco one-shot that I have EVER read. I stumbled upon Room Serviced through the Dangerous Liasons award, and I checked it out(it was soooooo good), so I decided that, hey, why not check out your other work. So I see this, and I\'m like,hmmm Harry and Draco, not my usual ship, but it\'s bound to be good, right? Right. Good is the understatement of the century to describe this piece. The epistolery technique really adds to the effect of the story. The way you only see Draco\'s point of view, and yet you are still able to understand and know what Harry is saying is great. The correspondence after Harry discovers who it is, coupled with his lack of ultimate rage and abandonment of the bond formed between the two is the greatest part of this genius piece of work. You have filled me with a feeling of satisfaction, and I really just want to leave letters for someone I don\'t know so well in their lockers and form a bond like this. AGh. I just feel like doing something crazy drastic now, after reading this, like the feeling of wanting to jump up and down and run around while sitting calmly at the beach and just listening to the waves at the same time. Ok. enough of my rambling, but I guess that is the only way I can convey to you the way your story has made me feel. Agh...I have some running and listening to the waves to do. Later, -Web of Silence
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is another one of your stories that I keep coming back to. I can\'t seem to quit reading it. It\'s so full of emotion and amazingly written that it must be one of my favorite H/D fics of all time. I can\'t wait for you to post more of your work!
person Zentiis
schedule February 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
all i can say is...WOW! that was brilliant! it was such a good depiction of Malfoy, all his responses are perfect and i could imagine harry asking the questions. It was like when you hear someone speaking on the phone to another, you can only hear one side of the conversation but you still somehow know what is going on.
I seriously LOVED this story! great work!!!
person Eye of Aurora
schedule January 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooohh!!! I absolutely love it! What a fabulous idea! You are a fantastic writer, witty and intelligent and eloquent ^_^ I very much enjoyed reading this. I think your portrayal of Malfoy was wonderful, and simply the whole of this fic was glorious. I love it. Please, do not stop writing D/H slash! Keep it up!
person lisa
schedule December 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was amazing, i loved how you only used Draco\'s letters and yet still portrayed basically what Harry was saying. I loved it.
person Incothe
schedule December 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was absolutely beautiful you are a wonderful writer . . .

You made me tear, and I\'m a guy for christ sakes

I give you many props pure genius

sincerely,

Incothe