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December 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, can anyone say, \"blatant Mary Sue\"? I definitely can; the summary itself screams Sue, right from the start. Let me be the first to ask, what\'s wrong with the canon characters? And why do you insist upon torturing Snape even more than he already is? Finally, grammar is good for you. That\'s all I have to say.
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November 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! thats all i can say Wow!
Heh i must admit, the only i came across your story was because you were logged on and i clicked on your pen name. i\'m glad i did ^.^ i\'m not a hard core hp fan but this story definitely has potential ^.~ Well keep up the good work yada yada ya...Can\'t wait to see what happens next ^.^
((probably soon to be avid reader of ..The Dare..))
-Midnight Dreams
Heh i must admit, the only i came across your story was because you were logged on and i clicked on your pen name. i\'m glad i did ^.^ i\'m not a hard core hp fan but this story definitely has potential ^.~ Well keep up the good work yada yada ya...Can\'t wait to see what happens next ^.^
((probably soon to be avid reader of ..The Dare..))
-Midnight Dreams
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November 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey Angel!
I thought you said that you\'d posted a new chapter, but I already read chapter three some time ago! Where is your new chapter?? I\'m dying to read more of your story :o)
Please update soon!
Love Leonora.
I thought you said that you\'d posted a new chapter, but I already read chapter three some time ago! Where is your new chapter?? I\'m dying to read more of your story :o)
Please update soon!
Love Leonora.
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October 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was sooo good! I think your story totally rocks! I couldn't stop laughing when picturing the scene w she she jumps into his lap, and when she says she thought he liked Lupin! He must be sooo mad now
Seriously.. I can't wait for your next chapter.. write write write
Love Leonora.
Seriously.. I can't wait for your next chapter.. write write write
Love Leonora.
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October 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi there Midnight Angel!
I hope this time I'll be able to post a review. I read your second chapter soon after you had posted it, and I tried to review it then, but there seemed to still be some trouble with that.
I'm really enjoying your story, and now I am REALLY curious to find out what she is going to do! Don't leave me waiting for too long ;o)
Keep up the good work.
Love Leonora.
I hope this time I'll be able to post a review. I read your second chapter soon after you had posted it, and I tried to review it then, but there seemed to still be some trouble with that.
I'm really enjoying your story, and now I am REALLY curious to find out what she is going to do! Don't leave me waiting for too long ;o)
Keep up the good work.
Love Leonora.