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for The Dare

by MidnightAngel

schedule September 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mmm, so far it's good, more please
person Miriam
schedule September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
okay, so like finish the story, PLEASE!!! I must like it up to now because I'm DYING to know what happens. AGGG.
person Anon
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, Winter is a fun Character. pity it hasnt been updated for so long, having troubles?
person Lady Shiva
schedule May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I must admit, the ravioli song bit made me giggle pretty hard. thankfully it looks like this story just might shape up to be a damn fine piece of fiction. Good thing too, as I was afraid this was just going to be a rehash of the story \"Seducing Severus Snape\" by Mariegoos(I think thats the name). Either way, I\'m actually quite looking forward to more =)
person intofire101
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this story is soooo good I love it, but that has a special reason behind it which you will see when I singh this review. I love the detention but he had to be all nice and then evil didn\'t he. I do have to say it keeps true to his character though which is one thing I am glad to see many stories don\'t keep him as Acurate as you have. I\'m also glad to see him with a character that isn\'t in the books becase people always put him with people in the books but I don\'t think any of the book characters are really right for him. I\'m sorry this is getting kind of long but there is so much I would like to say that I can\'t put in words. I supose I can just sum it up with I love the story keep up the good woprk and up date soon.
Winter (yes that is my real name and what prompted me to read the story suprised?)
person Midnight Dreams
schedule December 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love it ^.^ oooh naughty snape for looking down her shirt ^.~
schedule December 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey there!

Still loving your story! It\'s all a bit surrealistic, but it\'s really funny. I can\'t believe he let her sing that song!

Looking forward to the next detention!

Love Leonora.
person sam
schedule December 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
lmao! I laughed SO hard when she sang the ravioli song! please continue ASAP!
person Anon
schedule December 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think you mean \"toning it down.\"

\"Professor Snape!\" I exclaimed joyously. I ran over to him, dumped myself in his lap, threw my arms around his neck, gave him a big hug, and a kiss on his cheek.

OK, I have to ask, is this really your idea of how to seduce someone? Especially someone like Snape? Whatever Snape\'s personality problems, there\'s no way he could ever be seduced by an underage student, not even Perky Mary Sue.
schedule December 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! A new chapter finally! I\'m still loving your story. I\'m very curious to know how far Fred wants her to go. And I\'m looking forward to that detention of hers!

You get the italics by putting in front of the word/part you want in italic, and after the word/part. As for bold it\'s and .

Hope this shows up in my review btw *giggles* maybe the letters in between will just turn italic/bold. I\'m a bit curious to find out actually.

Well, a very nice chapter - looking forward to the next one. Hope you won\'t have any troubles with that one. ;o)

Love Leonora.