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April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is ... there are no words for it. It is a short story, yet so much has come out of it. I love this to bits! In fact, I\'m going to add this to my \'recommended stories\' right now. It actually felt as if it would really happen, like, it\'s so easy to believe its real! Instead of some fake story. I love this ... keep up the great writing.
~ Mercika
~ Mercika
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April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, now that was very well-written, and lovely... Do so love the sensitive Draco\'s in that I do believe they exist....
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March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I worship this story. I especially love the ending. We need more stories that deal with Harry and Ron\'s reactions to Hermione falling for Draco. There\'s so much poetic justice. I would absolutely love for you to continue this. I\'m such a fan. But I suppose I won\'t complain too much if you decide to keep it as a one-shot.
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March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just have to say that I absolutely LOVE this story, and all your other stories for that matter. I think the plot and the description work really well, as do the characterizations. The only squicky thing I find with this is from one line: \"It appeared, however, that there was a fairly sizeable difference between a girl of thirteen and a girl who was a few weeks shy of sixteen.\" It\'s really hard for me to believe that Hermione, as a seventh year, is ONLY fifteen. A few weeks shy of eighteen I could see. 11 years old in year 1, who maybe turned 12 beginning of the year. So her being seventeen seems more plausible than her being 15, and having sex. I\'m not sure if you meant to write that, or just didn\'t realize it if you did. Or maybe you don\'t even mean she\'s 15, just that she developed her curvy body then (?). Well, anyway, if you could e-mail about it, I\'d love that a lot. Now I just want to know if you meant to have her 15 or not, or whatever.
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March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can see why you won that award. i loved it. I wanted hermione to go and beet the hell out of ron and harry but the end was great! Just perfect.
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March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well Emily,
Simply put...I LOVED THIS LITTLE FICTLET. It was well written, funny and sassy, sensitive and GROAN, LOADED with a sexy Draco...
I just D.R.O.O.L. when I read stories that have my little shining star with a deep, sexy voice all intense and willing to please (wriggling eyebrows.) And, LORD do I LOVE it when Draco leans against walls..SIGH.
Anyway, it was great and I\'m going to read the rest of your one-shots. If this is any indication, I KNOW I will be very pleased. If you\'d like, I\'d love for you to pop on over and read my two stories here. THE THREE KEYS - a draco romance / drama. NOT a PWithP, an actual drama. The other IT HAD TO BE YOU - DM/HG sweet, romantic fict.
Well, regardless, you\'ve done a wonderful job!
Cheers,
Lorett
Simply put...I LOVED THIS LITTLE FICTLET. It was well written, funny and sassy, sensitive and GROAN, LOADED with a sexy Draco...
I just D.R.O.O.L. when I read stories that have my little shining star with a deep, sexy voice all intense and willing to please (wriggling eyebrows.) And, LORD do I LOVE it when Draco leans against walls..SIGH.
Anyway, it was great and I\'m going to read the rest of your one-shots. If this is any indication, I KNOW I will be very pleased. If you\'d like, I\'d love for you to pop on over and read my two stories here. THE THREE KEYS - a draco romance / drama. NOT a PWithP, an actual drama. The other IT HAD TO BE YOU - DM/HG sweet, romantic fict.
Well, regardless, you\'ve done a wonderful job!
Cheers,
Lorett
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February 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
IT\'S AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
CUTE, FUNNY AND HOTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
IT\'S AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
CUTE, FUNNY AND HOTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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February 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
can u write more? like another chapter about Harry and Rons reaction trying to get hermoine away from draco and hermione confronting them.
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January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kitten! He called her kitten! That is just so sexy! Great story.
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January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Really enjoyed it. :)