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September 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have to agree with your other reviewer. I can't understand why authors are constantly putting little notes within the story. Its distracting and if you ask me childish. You want someone to take your work seriously then they come across a parenthesis with some comment. I like this story, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter, but please if you feel the need to comment on your own work wait until the end.