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September 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
As always, intense and well-written. Your Snape is all the more compelling for his lack of physical perfection: the Potions Master doesn't need to look like a Chippendale dancer to exert his strange fascination. I've enjoyed your characterization of him in those of your stories I've found. It doesn't appear that you plan to continue this particular story beyond a one-shot, although I'd be grateful to be proven wrong.
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September 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dear God. So seldom am I roped in so quickly and so fiercely as I have been into this little story. Your writing is fluid, poetic and evocative. Your story is heartwrenchingly beautiful. I really would like to see what else would happen after this episode in the forest.
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September 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes a bit angsty, but with so much promis. Are you going to write a companion to this, possibly after the final battle and them meeting in the same spot ready to do it for real.
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September 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O I t I think I love you! I am off to look for anything else you might have done, anywhere. Drop me a line and let me know where to find your stories, if there be such a place. Happy wri!! R!!