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July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
uhhhhhhhhhhh! i love it! tantilizingly erotic! the image of them, side by side, naked in the forest... please consider a sequel!!!!!!
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July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was so original and heartbreaking! Are you going to have a sequel or was it a one-shot?
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July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope you continue on this. I wish to see how it ends. Death or Passion, either will do...
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July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I would like to read what happened after the final battle. I really liked the story.
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July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please write a follow up! Please, please, please, please, please!!!
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May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lovely... you are very talented, as well you know.
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May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my god. please please add or something that was just to good
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April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful. So full of angst, yet complete in itself. I bow to the master!
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January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have read this several times now and I think that it is one of the most beautifully simple yet most promising fics out there, it levees me wanting and I think that is wonderful
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November 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes, your story was well written and the tone beautifully eloquent - but unfortunately some of the words chosen didn't fit the context correctly. Perhaps limit your use of the Word thesaurus to every other word and the slight topographical errors will be overlooked.
Don't be offended. I teach Literature and deal with this on such a grand scale I want to smack Mr. Gates. Please continue writing, you obviously have a gift.
Don't be offended. I teach Literature and deal with this on such a grand scale I want to smack Mr. Gates. Please continue writing, you obviously have a gift.