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September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WTF?
schedule
October 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What happened? The story seems disjointed and rushed. You seriously need to get your idea and writing into shape. Once that is done, it's only a matter of having a Beta help you out. Seriously, you need it. You might want to take a break and reaat yat you have. We all have moments like this, but sometimes it takes someone else to point it out to us. Good luck.
schedule
October 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
it's great
schedule
October 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
it was fantastic
schedule
October 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
it's magnificent
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October 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
its wonderful
schedule
October 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
there now u have ur 5 reveiws now keep fukin wrighting
schedule
September 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this was fuckin awsum u have to wright more very very very very soon or else