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MORE!!!!!

I like it. Please update soon.

Hey I read this chapter and I loved it! I saw that you edited it recently could this mean that you might be continuing it? :-) I really hope so!! great writing.

OK, as requested, I read it. Good idea for a first story, resurrected. Why not update it? It would take but a few word changes to make it more compliant... specifically let Severus be the half-blood he is. If they get married before the law goes into effect, it does not matter if he's Pure, Half or Muggleborn. If they don't want the Ministry to interfere, just have them suggest getting married the Muggle way. Also, use a little honey to draw in readers ... add the actual words "marriage law" to your story preview and people will want to read it just for that. Regardless if you update or not, change the preview wording.

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Is that it? I liked it alot... more?

Nice start. Will it continue? This one has so much potential!

I love the " In your face/I'm getting what I want" Hermione. Hate to poop on it though but I think its "scared" and not "scarred"? at the end? "scared shitless" and "scarred for life" but then I still have to run through the I before E except after C ditty with my typing lol

xDD Setting Grimmauld place on fire. Awesome. :) I liked the twist, although some of your sentences were awkward and they seemed to sentimental to me.>.> Kinda OOC. Ah well still amusing.