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April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this, but there is one thing i kind of have a problem with.
i hate to nitpick, especially since your story is amazing so far, but I feel like you did Miriam kind of wrong.
The way you described her as having green eyes and red hair makes her feel to me like an Evans. The green eyes and red hair were characteristics of Lily, James had brown eyes and black hair.
But otherwise I love love love this story so far.
i hate to nitpick, especially since your story is amazing so far, but I feel like you did Miriam kind of wrong.
The way you described her as having green eyes and red hair makes her feel to me like an Evans. The green eyes and red hair were characteristics of Lily, James had brown eyes and black hair.
But otherwise I love love love this story so far.
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April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOODNESS!
This story is so good!
I hope you update some time, it would be very sad if you had just abandoned this spectacular fic.
This story is so good!
I hope you update some time, it would be very sad if you had just abandoned this spectacular fic.
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April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
:O shocking twist slytherin petunia :O:O :D i like it
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November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is great!! can't wait to read the rest!!!
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October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great story so far i have had a suspition that petunia was a squib but you blew my theory out of the water thanks for a great story so far.
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April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
dude, this is really good. i like this a lot. can\'t wait for the next post...
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February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like that Petunia was really a witch and she bound Dudley\'s powers. It is a very intriguing twist. Please update soon.
Merrideth
Merrideth
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January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a wonderful story so far, but the only thing that confuses me is why does the physical description of Mirium Potter fit the physical description of Lily Evans?
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January 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey this is good
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December 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I had writters block... and am still a little stuck... I may re write this chapter or add on to it I dont know...
Sorry it took so long but I am still working on it I promise!
Sorry it took so long but I am still working on it I promise!