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for Walls of Jericho

by darnedchild

person Sharon
schedule February 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loving it. Can\'t wait for more!
person Fury
schedule February 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m so glad that you\'re finally continuing this fic... Write more soon!
person Katie K
schedule February 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOVE this story!!!!! Please update soon!!!!!!!
person magicalwonder
schedule February 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a fun and witty story. I think it should be interesting to see how this progresses. I like the idea of the challenge. I will also pray that your husband returns to you soon and we all have peace.

person SeverusGal
schedule February 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story so far! Can\'t wait for more!
person Sarah
schedule February 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This PROMISES to be good. Can\'t wait to read more!
person Moi
schedule February 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hugely entertaining! I can hardly stand to wait for the next!
Snape is perfect--snarky, darkly brooding, and yet never abandoning his charge for a moment, ever vigilant....
Your beta sounds like a very funny person. (I\'m so 12 I\'m 11! I\'ll have to teach my 12 year old that one, she\'ll like it.)

Prayers for you and your husband during this difficult time.
person daygonna
schedule February 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hopefully u will be able to update more now, if not it is understood. this is a great story so i look forward to reading more
person lovethelab
schedule February 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry to hear about your husband deployment. I know it must be hard for you especially since you have just moved. It always was hard when my father (USMC) got new orders, so I can sympathise. Hope he comes home safely soon. I am enjoying your story, I hope you will be able to continue now that you are somewhat settled.
person tori
schedule October 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
it's starting off great, i like the storyline. there are some minor spelling errors but other than that it's great!